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Description The Deathy was killing lot of peple the news paapr said the Deathy is killing lots of peple mosty crminals and bad peple!
Opaque Pagawu was in his room he was watching the news with a Shiigabo name Ryick. Ryick said you have food Opaqu said I had grapes give me some grapes said Ryick. Opaque went downstairs to get som graps.
Hello opaque said Light's dad said how are you and yur sidter. Opaque said I am fine how you said Opaque's dad good my smart son I am now a detective I am to cath the Deathy. The Deathy is bad he is killing the peple that are bad. 
Opaque was anger! The Deathy is not Killy gud pelpe juts. The bad! Is sill murdr sAid Opaue's dad. The Kira is killing and must killing d must be killed.
Opaque was anger thought I am making a new whirled must keep killing I will pretend that I agree with dad. Opaque got some grapes and went upstairs.
Somewhere else ace detetiv H was sittig in his room eatibg candy was drinking tea. He rated his candy Nd called the police. Hello police said H I want you to put in the news say ace detetive H is going to catch the Deathy. Ok said the police he news wikk say this.
Later the news was on tv Opaque was watching the news with angr. Ryick was sitting on the bed eatig grapes he sai mm these grapes are gooood. Opaque says hush the news is talking.
Hello said the news the deathy is goig to get catchd by ace detective H. Opaque said ha they will never catch the Kira said Opaque I will keep killing and they nevar catch me! No said Ryick wou must think with smart think and b sneake. Okay sAi
Opaque. Opaque watched the news and later a man came on! Hello Deathy said the man I m Harold h. Taylor I M going to catch you you Deathy!
No said Opaque To the news I will write you name in my killnote you will be dead! So he writers ace detectived Harod H. Taylor in the Killnote. On the news the man died!
Hahaha I kild you ace detective H! Said Opaque now you are dead! The news said hello Deathy I am the real H!
What this is?! yelld Ppaque I had you killeddd with the Killjote! Killed the wrong person said the news You killed a prisoner! Wyat said Opaque to the news that s crazy ace detective H is still aliev!? 
Hahaha said Ryick as he eater the rapez said Opaque this smart like y! I Onow said Opaque I will have to Killy him efore he kilks ne!
Opaque was angry so he killed more peple w wthe Kilnote then went to gt Ryoc meore jdapes.
Ryick was yelling said give me the grapes! I am hungr! Said Opaque no grapes then Opaque went downstairs and to school. He would have tib link a thot abut how to kill ace detective H!
Ace detective H was sitting was talkig to pplice said hello police I am to find the Deathy. The police said what you do how you are catch the Deathy?! The Deathy could be nnywher in th whirled! Said ace detective H no the Dsathy is in DAngr City!
Oh. Noo aaid the poolice said we are in Dancer City!
Yes said ace detective L said that means it is no tas. Hard to find th Deathy now! 
Oh no said Opaque's tather who was a poice man said my childs an my wiffe us in Danger City this is now a lot of dangerous!
This is gettig ntence! Find out what happn nex in Killmote chaper three!
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Comments: 14

Melian-the-Ranger [2011-05-27 20:23:37 +0000 UTC]

That does it, man... a whole YEAR has flown by and this is still the best thing ever...

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FlyingBox In reply to Melian-the-Ranger [2011-05-28 10:17:04 +0000 UTC]

o-o dude. it's been a year since i wrote this. wtf

My two favorite parts are this one:
The news said hello Deathy I am the real H!
aaaand this one:
Oh no said Opaque's tather who was a poice man said my childs an my wiffe us in Danger City this is now a lot of dangerous!
Just for the absurdity of it. God, this story is crack.

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Melian-the-Ranger In reply to FlyingBox [2011-05-29 01:24:08 +0000 UTC]

My favorite parts are probably:

Ryick was sitting on the bed eatig grapes he sai mm these grapes are gooood. Opaque says hush the news is talking.

The Deathy was killing lot of peple the news paapr said the Deathy is killing lots of peple mosty crminals and bad peple!

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FlyingBox In reply to Melian-the-Ranger [2011-05-31 03:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Lololol I know....
Killnote was prolly one of my favorite things I've written XDD

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Melian-the-Ranger [2010-05-24 03:02:47 +0000 UTC]

Damn, I'm STILL laughing at this. I haven't stopped since April, dammit!

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FlyingBox In reply to Melian-the-Ranger [2010-05-25 03:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, I'm almost done #3!

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Melian-the-Ranger In reply to FlyingBox [2010-05-25 19:56:29 +0000 UTC]

I can hardly wait!

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blackstars57 [2010-05-16 03:22:13 +0000 UTC]

me nt able toooooo stp loololololzig

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FlyingBox In reply to blackstars57 [2010-05-21 14:29:11 +0000 UTC]

XD Ahahaha, thanks a bunch! I'm workin' on Chapitrr Trhee now!

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Melian-the-Ranger [2010-04-20 01:20:16 +0000 UTC]

dude dis storie toadalie rox mayn...
Even Angry Lady seemed to like it, lol.

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FlyingBox In reply to Melian-the-Ranger [2010-04-21 00:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Angry lady es teh fail.

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Melian-the-Ranger In reply to FlyingBox [2010-04-22 01:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Very true.

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tunnelingcat [2010-04-19 19:27:23 +0000 UTC]

dis heres is gewwwd story! i like the part where i like the part where opaque was said "rapes" not was he wanted to said grapez! i laughed!

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FlyingBox In reply to tunnelingcat [2010-04-20 01:13:30 +0000 UTC]

FOR T3h \/\/iN

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