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Following a featherLeading you through rye
Hoping for a different dawn
Flying bluebirds infect the eye
Break another bone
as the needle pierces a fish's fin
Counting blue-eyed crows
as the golden bells begin to din
A sparrow swooping down,
up-roots a graceful tree
And as you say good-bye,
I closed my eyes at three
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Comments: 43
Eloarei [2010-05-18 19:08:22 +0000 UTC]
I honestly can't say what it's supposed to be about, ^^ but it definitely has a very fairy-tale type feel to it. A cross between Sleeping Beauty and Alice in Wonderland, perhaps. It's neat. Very pretty.
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FoolForThought In reply to Eloarei [2010-05-18 19:21:19 +0000 UTC]
I really don't either. I wrote it in three minutes in my English class because the words just started to spill out of me.
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Eloarei In reply to FoolForThought [2010-05-18 19:30:53 +0000 UTC]
Gah, that's so cool! I wish stuff like that would happen to me. ^^
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FoolForThought In reply to Eloarei [2010-05-18 19:37:43 +0000 UTC]
I guess. The only problem with that is, you can't control when it will happen to you. I didn't have paper at the time, so most of this poem is now written on my arm.
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Eloarei In reply to FoolForThought [2010-05-18 19:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Haha that's pretty awesome.
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FoolForThought In reply to Eloarei [2010-05-18 19:42:03 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately, the ink's smudging and now it looks like I carved up my arm with a turkey knife...
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yuzi-13 In reply to FoolForThought [2010-07-02 00:33:02 +0000 UTC]
lets fly across the black hoooooooole of DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM rawr
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yuzi-13 In reply to FoolForThought [2010-08-01 14:55:56 +0000 UTC]
HI rar means i love you in dinasour form
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