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Published: 2015-03-24 19:14:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1521; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description by the sheer cliff edge
vertigo clutches my heart
thinking of falling...
a freshly feathered chick
breeze catches new wings and lifts
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saiun [2015-04-18 04:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations! Your work has won Third Place in the Haiku Club's 2015 Shining Wind Contest .



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Formel In reply to saiun [2015-04-18 12:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Itsjustwordsreally [2015-03-25 13:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Hungary! 
I honestly while reading wondered of to the 'mountain' in Budapest :3
the one with the eagle/vulture on it (im sorry if not, I just really thought it was a vulture)

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Formel In reply to Itsjustwordsreally [2015-03-25 16:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you thought of Budapest.
Yes, that's the turul by the side of Buda Castle... In fact it's a kind of large falcon, but is does look like a vulture. It's great that you know about that statue.

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Itsjustwordsreally In reply to Formel [2015-03-25 16:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I love that city, the country actually, my parents used to have a house on the countryside miss it there.
but I was there (on top by the castle) last year during Sziget  

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Formel In reply to Itsjustwordsreally [2015-03-26 15:46:14 +0000 UTC]

That's great.

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Itsjustwordsreally In reply to Formel [2015-03-26 17:41:23 +0000 UTC]

:3

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saiun [2015-03-24 20:51:39 +0000 UTC]

Accepted for the Haiku Club's 2015 Shining Wind Contest !  Make sure to check out the other entries and browse our Global Saijiki .  

Good luck and consider participating in our other active events .



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Formel In reply to saiun [2015-03-24 21:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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