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Amy Xi Feng Watanabe1. Amy is half-Japanese, half-Chinese. She is only fluent in English and Mandarin. She can understand Japanese for the most part and sort of speak it, but reading? Hopeless case, unless it's all in Kanji.
2. Amy has an older brother named Jeng Li Watanabe. His English name is Kain, he hates it, and she will not hesitate to blurt it out for the sole sake of pissing him off. In fact, most of what she says and does is merely to push her older brother's buttons. Don't take her seriously if you can help it.
3. Then again, she might be just as devious as Jake is and weave some hidden meanings behind her words. ...but she's too dumb to do that. And she's ten years old.
4. Despite being seven years younger than Li, she is only three inches shorter. He hates the fact that she grew so quickly, and for more reasons than just pride. See, because she's tall, people often think that she's much, much older than she really is. She's fairly pretty and looks slightly airheaded by default. She's basically Douchebag Brigade Bait.
5. Amy, like Li, used to play piano but totally ditched it in favor of another instrument. While Li chose a slightly less common instrument (electric bass and upright bass--for some reason he considers them the same thing 'cause he's a little shekiface), Amy went straight for another Typically Asian Instrument--the violin. She can only play two songs on it--Twinkle Twinkle Little Star and Zigeunerweisen by Sarasate. This is mainly because her violin teacher, fourteen-year-old Lucas Castell, loves that song to death. She doesn't really know the pitches she plays; she just practiced that song so much that her fingers pretty much take over. Ask her to play an easier song and she won't even be able to sightread the first measure. But she's working on it.
6. Amy, despite being Asian, sucks at math.
7. "Xi Feng" means "western phoenix". Apparently while their mother was pregnant with her, she had a dream of a great phoenix rising up from the west. Amy hates her Chinese name, saying that it's too epic and fancypants.
8. Despite coming from a filthy rich family (another addition to being Douchebag Brigade Bait), Amy is not spoiled. Her grandparents did most of the raising (as her parents were too busy with work), and they made damn well sure that she did her own laundry and made her own bed.
9. When she turns sixteen, it becomes painfully apparent that she has great aim. Case in point: she goes paintballing with a friend and owns his face.
8) Drawing and character belong to the great meeee!--*shot* I hope that I didn't royally screw up full-body this time. *shudder* I need to attempt full-body more often. And if you noticed, I actually attempted to put folds in her clothing! D8 WHAT IS THIS MADNESS.
Don't mind the hands. Please don't mind the hands. I can only draw hands if they take up like half the page. >.>;;;
The Kanji in the drawing says "Watanabe". The Hanja in my icon says "Cho". It's pronounced "Zhao" in Chinese, as in "Zhao Yun", that hot bastard from Dynasty Warriors--*shot* ...Just sayin' XD
Critique please? o 3o
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Comments: 35
A-Quiet-Wind [2010-10-07 07:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow I should really check my deviantart more. 4,000+ pictures to go through is kind of long...
ANYWAYS. I think this is a great picture! Very clean lines as usual mate.
Also as for the "looking like an Asian" thing. I think that's kind of null when it comes to anime/manga because everyone looks like they're from the same race. American characters are signified by blonde hair and blue eyes (Dragonball Z Quote: *screams for 3 episodes*).
So I personally don't think you have to worry about making them look Asian but rather just flesh out their backstory and stuff to make them seem Asian which you have done so kudos!
Draw more.
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to A-Quiet-Wind [2010-11-07 20:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah, story of my life. XD Thanks for your encouragement~! But no, I will not draw more. XD
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A-Quiet-Wind In reply to fourdaysofdeath [2010-11-08 04:25:30 +0000 UTC]
Why not?
I think you're still pretty damn good, I don't see how you'd see otherwise.
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to A-Quiet-Wind [2010-11-08 10:26:07 +0000 UTC]
:< But...time. I has issues with time. XD
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mystiqueeyes [2010-08-23 00:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Loooking good! Do you use references or is this all from memory? Wish I could draw. lol Great job!
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to mystiqueeyes [2010-08-24 17:23:08 +0000 UTC]
Mostly memory, but I had to like...take pictures of my hands in a way that I think violinists would hold their instrument. XD Really difficult.
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Zackypenguin [2010-08-19 14:58:09 +0000 UTC]
I say, this is great.OoO
Yesh, I like the folds too~>u<
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to Zackypenguin [2010-08-19 21:33:35 +0000 UTC]
O 3O REALLY? <3333 Thank you! XD
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SeaGreenAngel [2010-08-16 03:19:20 +0000 UTC]
I like the softness of this, and the expression, you do profile and hands very well. One thing that would help improve this is to study the way people stand, particularly if they are going to be standing for a long time. Remember, people tend to 'favor' one leg, and so weight is rarely distributed evenly to both legs, and people don't stand with their feet so close together when they do evenly distribute their weight. Another suggestion would be to darken the lines, ink it if possible.
I hope this helps and I really hope you keep drawing, you have a lot of talent and a lot of potential.
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to SeaGreenAngel [2010-08-16 06:26:52 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, after looking at the scan I noticed that the lines were really uneven. O_o So I fixed it...a bit. I might re-scan it. *shrugs* D: And I'm scared of inking anything, really. XD;;
I'll keep the whole "favoring one leg" in mind, even though musicians are taught to stand and sit straight. But then again, most of my instruments dictate that I sit down while playing, so maybe I should ask an actual violinist. XD Thanks for the observation~
^^ Thank you for your time!
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SeaGreenAngel In reply to fourdaysofdeath [2010-08-16 06:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Another idea would be to watch youtube videos. They help me.
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to SeaGreenAngel [2010-08-16 22:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh, that's a good suggestion! I hadn't thought of that. ^^ Thank you!
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2lazy2talk [2010-08-15 23:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Overall anatomy is great, though the left wrist seems dislocated. You say she's asian but the sketch doesnt transmit it but that could be because of the perspective and i'm aware that asian face anatomy is harder, atleast for me since i'm western.
Also,when it comes to character creation artist try to make the character as unique as possible so it can be easily remembered and pointed out but since the character is new, i'd say your on good path ;D
If i'm forgeting something just say so ;D
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to 2lazy2talk [2010-08-16 05:00:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the whole "Asian face" thing could be because I'm Asian myself. And even though I'm 100% full-blooded people still think I'm some other ethnicity. |D So I guess whenever I draw someone Asian it doesn't look Asian. Thanks for pointing it out, though! I'll work on it to the best of my ability. XD
;D And thank you! I'm hoping that as time passes, she'll grow more interesting. Or...not, since she's a minor character anyways...but still good to have. XD
^^ Thank you for your time!
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R727 [2010-08-14 17:52:26 +0000 UTC]
owo Her hands look great! And her proportions look pretty good tooooo-- *jealous*
*buys this shirt for Amy-- [link] *
She and Remi should try paintball together-- nah, Remi wouldn't shoot her, even if it's just paint. ...but then she could own his face too. XDD
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to R727 [2010-08-14 20:18:57 +0000 UTC]
O Ao Really? I thought her hands were like...totally screwed up because that's how Esther rolls. Can't draw anything small, which is why I only draw portraits. >.>;; Speaking of portraits, I really need to scan Emtis before my father does something terrible to him. Did you know that he wrote on Hayden and spilled water on Jake? XD Totally on accident...or so he swears. >.>;;
XD! Li would make her wear that shirt as a badge of shame while he tutors her in that subject. SHAME, AMY. ONE CANNOT BE LI'S LITTLE SISTER AND SUCK AT MATH.
LOL She probably wouldn't shoot at him, either. ";~; He's too pretty to shoot!"
And Leon would pop up and declare, "HIS BEAUTIFUL FAAAAACE!"
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to XroXasX13 [2010-08-13 06:56:25 +0000 UTC]
O.o No, she's one of my OCs. XD
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Revilis [2010-08-07 19:49:14 +0000 UTC]
Wow, You did really good job on her eye. I still dont see whats wrong with her hands though. Considering the complexity of drawing hands from that angle, in THAT position, you did really well!! O.O!!
Bawww haha she seems like an interesting character >w< I liked the part about her choice of instrument and the songs she can play. Also the random paintball fight. XD;
>3<
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to Revilis [2010-08-10 07:35:07 +0000 UTC]
8D Thanks! I obsessed over her hands for hours. XDDD I'm no violin player.
XD; Random paintball fight! But Li knows quite a bit about guns since his father's company deals with technology (and designs guns for fun o_o). Amy eventually starts listening to her brother's lectures and gets a little interested in the business too, even though she doesn't really go into it. One of these days I'll throw her at Shiina or something. XD
> 3< <3333
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Revilis In reply to fourdaysofdeath [2010-08-11 15:44:17 +0000 UTC]
you havent played the violin??
Oooh thats interesting. Haha did he ever take part in a paintball fight as well?
ooooh yaaaay~^^
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to Revilis [2010-08-12 07:02:18 +0000 UTC]
Nope~ No violins for Esther. I'm planning to learn in college on the side. Just for fun. XD Might as well, you know?
And haha, Li would take part in paintballing, but I think he's too lazy and anti-fun to do such a thing. And, interestingly enough, he's too busy. O____o
^^
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ilikemysarcasticside [2010-08-07 07:16:15 +0000 UTC]
WAHHHH YOUR ANATOMY I HATE IT.
no i really love it, i just hate that you draw so well. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS!!! i love your character descriptions XD they make me laugh~
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to ilikemysarcasticside [2010-08-10 06:52:08 +0000 UTC]
D: I HAVE NOTHING TO TEACH YOU. JUST STARE AT PEOPLE. LIKE THIS. O____O ...or like how Hansol stares at people. I dunno. XD
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ilikemysarcasticside In reply to fourdaysofdeath [2010-08-11 02:07:37 +0000 UTC]
lolsnort hansol. missable jerk. ; ^;
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to ilikemysarcasticside [2010-08-11 03:26:55 +0000 UTC]
XD I barely remember anything about him except his accent.
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ilikemysarcasticside In reply to fourdaysofdeath [2010-08-11 06:06:36 +0000 UTC]
mrah, hansol D:<
/done
lulz
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toto-toto [2010-08-07 07:01:07 +0000 UTC]
wow!
it's just great
good job!
could you take a look at this please?just tell me what you think
thanks.
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fourdaysofdeath In reply to toto-toto [2010-08-10 06:51:31 +0000 UTC]
^^ Thank you!
D: Did you delete that deviation?
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