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Published: 2005-01-20 06:25:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 53
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A poem I wroteafter being inspired
by my favorite song.
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Comments: 11
Hmmm. I don't really know what to say other than should it read "upon water" ? I don't think it matters but it came to mind when I was readint through it a second time. The flow is good especially in the last streme of lines. Overall good job. I like the picture.
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Well, I can't seem to find the original flame
I made for this pic so I don't think I'll be able to
make the changes so we'll just pretend it says "upon water"
cause I'm a lazy bastard lol and I don't feel like trying
to recreate it. Thanks anyways though.
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Making it upon water does sound alot better.
I think I just might fix that right now as well
as a few things with the picture. Thanks.
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i like the effect on the background and the poems rocks
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I like this, wonderful personification, but shouldn't it be "it tells me hope is only 'a' word"? Or maybe not, I don't know, I'm odd about words. (no really, there are actually certain words that I will not even say just because I don't really like them)
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Fixed it. Thanks agian.
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I've got to stop making
these things so late at night.
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lol, no problem, I make sooo many spelling errors/word errors, and commenters always just tell me what needs changing, but that's just cuz I'm lazy
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OH SHIT!!. Your right.
I'd better fix that. Thanks.
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