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frozenentity — The Frozen Entity
Published: 2004-12-25 12:37:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 25
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Just a poem I wrote with an image I feelrelates to it.
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got the text centered now so, looks a little
better.
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Apparently I spelled "Silhouette" wrong
but it's fixed now.
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Comments: 14
Oh, beautiful poem. I had some difficulties reading the font though. Very moody.
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Thanks.
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Ice forms over your delicate frame
A slender figure frozen in time
A beautiful entity you became
I saw you come now I watch you go
Nothing left but a memory
A Silhouette of long ago
Torment plagues my peace of mind
Like frost consumes a rose
You were my unrefined
Angel of repose
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That was short and to the point. It wasn't like so many other poems that try to grasp similar concepts, that drag on with too many details. I liked this poem a lot! Great job!
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I like the glow effect, and the blue and black you did it with
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that was a beautiful poem.. you got talent..
and the image & poem totally relate..
keep it up ..
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Thanks.
I'm really happy that you like it.
I needed an ego boost so
thanks again.
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Wow..
This is really neat.. quite breath taking... I love the image and the imgae really contects well with the picture
Very Very nice... I really like it
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Oops. I forgot to push reply.
look below.
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Thanks. I think so to. I tried to get the text to center but
my damn program couldn't do it. Oh well. I'm happy with it.
Thanks again.
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i like i like, its beautiful and the bluriness adds prettiness to the colour
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I forgot to hit reply on all of these so
please check everything you posted at
for replies.
Sorry. I'm still a noob.
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