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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave — I forgot
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Published: 2014-10-02 21:28:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 327579; Favourites: 302; Downloads: 0
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Description I used to love
I used to dream
I used to hope

But I forgot

I need something
(Someone)
To remind me of these beautiful things
For a shard of happiness

So I can love again
Dream again
Hope again...

Live again
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ??? [2025-01-13 21:57:18 +0000 UTC]

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User48 [2024-12-24 03:43:09 +0000 UTC]

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srdrawing7 In reply to User48 [2025-03-09 05:05:51 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to User48 [2024-12-24 05:11:33 +0000 UTC]

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User48 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2024-12-24 06:21:33 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to User48 [2024-12-24 19:53:07 +0000 UTC]

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User48 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2024-12-25 00:31:22 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to User48 [2024-12-25 05:12:12 +0000 UTC]

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PST-Magnus [2024-12-19 13:04:42 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to PST-Magnus [2024-12-19 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

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PST-Magnus In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2024-12-20 07:15:36 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to PST-Magnus [2024-12-20 21:27:43 +0000 UTC]

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sarahjoshartsstudio [2024-09-25 03:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to sarahjoshartsstudio [2024-09-25 20:03:24 +0000 UTC]

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imdcr [2024-08-17 04:03:22 +0000 UTC]

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kwbs [2024-08-17 02:27:00 +0000 UTC]

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Mugurashh [2024-08-10 21:39:42 +0000 UTC]

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ffifhrfi [2024-06-20 17:58:22 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ffifhrfi [2024-06-20 21:20:26 +0000 UTC]

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FOURIV4 [2017-04-08 13:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Love the twist of the beginning in the end....nice write.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to FOURIV4 [2017-04-08 19:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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thomas-cruz [2014-12-06 05:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Love the way you wrote this. That (someone) line really spoke to me for some reason. Great work!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to thomas-cruz [2014-12-06 19:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it

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DoveAngel8 [2014-10-09 19:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Well written
Simple but good

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to DoveAngel8 [2014-10-09 21:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot.

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KingfisherSilentArmy [2014-10-07 22:50:36 +0000 UTC]

I like that line "a shard of happiness"
It's lovely and poetical.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KingfisherSilentArmy [2014-10-08 02:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I wonder where I get these things

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KingfisherSilentArmy In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-08 08:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.
Well you must have a high level of inspiration.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KingfisherSilentArmy [2014-10-08 20:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. Who knows?

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KingfisherSilentArmy In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-21 20:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KingfisherSilentArmy [2014-10-21 21:29:59 +0000 UTC]

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angeluchiha7 [2014-10-07 19:28:44 +0000 UTC]

nice peom

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to angeluchiha7 [2014-10-07 20:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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angeluchiha7 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-08 20:11:11 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^_^

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wolfgirl2403 [2014-10-05 18:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps someone will come soon and help you remember.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2014-10-05 21:20:04 +0000 UTC]

I sure hope so.

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BlueLionEyes [2014-10-04 23:34:42 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to BlueLionEyes [2014-10-04 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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BlueLionEyes In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-04 23:43:45 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome C:

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to BlueLionEyes [2014-10-04 23:49:35 +0000 UTC]

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EvilScarrlett [2014-10-04 17:22:50 +0000 UTC]

i relate completely. at a time when poetry isn't in my own mind, thank you for filling the void.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-10-04 23:40:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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EvilScarrlett In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-06 17:31:43 +0000 UTC]

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SnowWhitesAngel [2014-10-04 03:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Meant to comment earlier, but commenting now

This is really amazing ;a; And I completely understand the feelings in it. Especially about being lost and needing someone to help you, essentially, find yourself. Granted, it's true that having someone doesn't make everything better- not at all. But it makes things easier and if you forget how to live, they can remind you. <3

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to SnowWhitesAngel [2014-10-04 03:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. 
I guess being alone makes one understand the true meaning of friendship. It can help a lot.

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HopeSwings777 [2014-10-03 21:18:46 +0000 UTC]

You can't expect another person to make all of your hopes and dreams come true. You yourself have to be in charge of all that. A lover isn't a jackpot or a fairy godmother. 

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to HopeSwings777 [2014-10-03 22:53:11 +0000 UTC]

I know it takes more than a lover to fix all my problems. But it would help

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Slipmaskin [2014-10-03 21:13:44 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say it is very imaginative, not very original either, but rather bland and dry. It's a common theme, and although it isn't exactly badly executed, I feel that it just doesn't have much feeling to it - no sting.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Slipmaskin [2014-10-03 22:54:50 +0000 UTC]

It was just something quick. Like, written in a minute or so. I didn't expect it to become this popular.

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Slipmaskin In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-04 13:49:23 +0000 UTC]

I had gathered that much, but nevertheless, that is my opinion of it

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