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Published: 2013-12-16 00:38:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1068; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Description I think I'm in love
With someone I don't deserve
To me she's just perfect
In every possible way

The white of her skin
The black of her hair
The shadow in her eyes
All together make my day
Much easier to endure

We only talked a few times
But she could be the one
The one who will save me
From my life of misery

But how will she react
When she sees my scars?
When she knows about my demons?
When she realizes I'm broken (beyond repair)?

Will she accept me for who I am?
Or just walk away?
I only want her to be happy
If not with me
Then in any other way she wants
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ??? [2014-02-02 22:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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AnnaBellLee17 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-02-02 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome.Β Β you have a natural talent.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to AnnaBellLee17 [2014-02-02 23:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.I just write out my thoughts.

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Licuriciu90 [2013-12-25 20:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Such a wonderful poem.really like it.fave <3

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Licuriciu90 [2013-12-26 00:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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scienceofawesome [2013-12-22 08:32:52 +0000 UTC]

That is just- wow

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to scienceofawesome [2013-12-22 23:18:26 +0000 UTC]

I'll take that as a compliment

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scienceofawesome In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-22 23:28:13 +0000 UTC]

It's is! It's amazing

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to scienceofawesome [2013-12-24 00:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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scienceofawesome In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-24 01:13:40 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Morpheus1035 [2013-12-21 14:26:11 +0000 UTC]

You have to tell her how you feel, preferably sooner than later. If you don't, the regret will drive you mad. Trust me, I know...

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Morpheus1035 [2013-12-21 23:52:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't want to rush things and scew everything up. I made that mistake in the past and I don't want it to happen again.

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Morpheus1035 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-21 23:59:32 +0000 UTC]

of course not. just don't use that as an excuse to not tell her until its too late

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Morpheus1035 [2013-12-22 23:43:38 +0000 UTC]

I know, I know. The right time will come, I just have to pay attention so I don't miss it.

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Pagrodebraska [2013-12-21 04:59:16 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2013-12-21 23:49:25 +0000 UTC]

It feels nice, doesn't it?

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-12 08:14:17 +0000 UTC]

no it don't cause it hurts every day knowing that she is with someone else instead of me, but at least she is happy...

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-12 22:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sorry. And you're right, you can be happy beacause she is happy. Better than nothing, I guess...

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-13 00:39:44 +0000 UTC]

mhm and that's my most of the poems I wrote are about that one person, if you like feel free to check them out. ^_^

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-13 23:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Try not to obcess about it, OK? I guess you have to move on.

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-18 02:18:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah, moving on is always the hardest part till you find someone to full that void lol, till the poetry makes life easier to cope with

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-18 23:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Looks like we have to love to feel complete, right?

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-19 09:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Mhm i would have to agree for otherwise with my self at least, all I feel is a void with in my self, feeling jaded all the time, replacing my feelings with those that surrounds me to make me seem normal. Is that the same with you?

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-19 23:07:46 +0000 UTC]

I feel a void alright. But I don't try to seem normal.Β 

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-20 09:06:27 +0000 UTC]

if I didn't try to seem normal then I would be locked up in a psych ward lol

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-20 23:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess the best is to pretend to be normal around other people and let out the insanity when you're alone.

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Pagrodebraska In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-21 07:53:07 +0000 UTC]

lol yep


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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Pagrodebraska [2014-01-21 21:20:40 +0000 UTC]

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Strelnikov72 [2013-12-21 03:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know where you're coming from, brother...

Fell madly in love with my friend of six years in October.Β  It seems a lost cause, but there is nothing for it but to hold my head high and march through hell.

If you don't try to win her heart and at least let her know how you feel, you will be second-guessing yourself for a long time.Β  Trust me, I know.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Strelnikov72 [2013-12-21 23:53:50 +0000 UTC]

I know I have to at least try to win her heart. If it doesn't happen... Then I have to accept it.

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Strelnikov72 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-21 23:58:00 +0000 UTC]

With ALL my heart, I hope you succeed!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Strelnikov72 [2013-12-22 23:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, pal

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cutiewolf15668 [2013-12-19 01:59:46 +0000 UTC]

I love thisΒ poem

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to cutiewolf15668 [2013-12-19 23:46:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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cutiewolf15668 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-20 04:23:36 +0000 UTC]

yw

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bloodlustbunny [2013-12-17 03:18:01 +0000 UTC]

iΒ  wish someone loved me like that

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to bloodlustbunny [2013-12-17 22:58:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure someone does. You just need to find that person.

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wolfgirl2403 [2013-12-17 01:15:07 +0000 UTC]

If she is worth it then she will accept you~

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2013-12-17 22:59:05 +0000 UTC]

I sure hope so...

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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-18 01:20:17 +0000 UTC]

As do I~

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2013-12-19 01:26:57 +0000 UTC]

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NanaThatha [2013-12-16 19:59:06 +0000 UTC]

The right time will come...Β 

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to NanaThatha [2013-12-16 23:12:53 +0000 UTC]

I sure hope so.

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NanaThatha In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-12-17 03:38:41 +0000 UTC]

yep!

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MrHighsky [2013-12-16 14:57:44 +0000 UTC]

"If a bird is afraid of falling, it will never be able to fly" so be fearless.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to MrHighsky [2013-12-16 23:13:33 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could... But I'll try.

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theloverofTMI [2013-12-16 12:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Honey, take it one step at a time. From my experiences, its no good just jumping straight into what could be or might be. Start with friendship and if she really is as beautiful on the inside as you see from her physical beauty and will love you for you than you know she's just right for you. Just promise me you won't go giving her heart away unless you know for sure. It only leads to heart ache. I know this from personal experience. I do hope all goes well though Β 

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to theloverofTMI [2013-12-16 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

I know that. That's why I'm a bit afraid to open myself to her. I made the mistake you mentioned a few times and I don't want it to happen again. But I gotta try, right? Because I think she's worth it.

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Warm-Vibe [2013-12-16 06:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Everyone has problems, in my terms, "challenges."
My mom has always told me, "It isn't the person, it's their actions" meaning a person's actions don't define them. What has happened in the past shouldn't define you. You are you.

Hopefully, she won't reject friendship. Otherwise, that'd be sad... Try to get and know her first?

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Warm-Vibe [2013-12-16 23:17:10 +0000 UTC]

True. But I don't want the past to repeat itself.


That's what I'm trying. One step at a time.

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