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I'm drowning in sadnessAnd spiraling into madness
My mind is a mess
So make a guess
I'm falling into craziness
So I can become careless
And find hapiness
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Comments: 24
nicoxmel In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-11 10:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Lol I thought it fitted your poem
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to nicoxmel [2014-09-11 23:08:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it does...
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sumersela [2013-10-08 11:16:34 +0000 UTC]
just be carefull , bask in madness is one thing, drown in it, is another
take it from someone who has both
btw nice poem
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to sumersela [2013-10-08 19:59:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. And thanks for the warning.
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sumersela In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-08 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]
youre welcome
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wolfgirl2403 [2013-10-08 01:24:13 +0000 UTC]
Nice~ Madness sounds like it would be nice if only for a little bit.Β
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2013-10-08 19:59:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. A moment of madness once in a while to let go the negativity...
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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-08 23:23:20 +0000 UTC]
Yup~ And the stress.Β
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2013-10-09 12:08:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Unleash it all.
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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-09 22:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Exactly~Β
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to bloodlustbunny [2013-10-07 23:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Welcome to my world. Β
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bloodlustbunny In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-07 23:38:08 +0000 UTC]
that is also a song by the sick puppies calld my world
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bloodlustbunny In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-08 00:07:47 +0000 UTC]
it is look it up
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LMW-The-Poet [2013-10-07 15:01:46 +0000 UTC]
How is the rhyme in a sense of expressing yourself in the poem?
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to LMW-The-Poet [2013-10-07 18:22:06 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean?
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LMW-The-Poet In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-10-07 19:01:00 +0000 UTC]
You mentioned once before you don't get the point across, or express yourself, when you use rhymes, which you used in this case.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to LMW-The-Poet [2013-10-07 21:28:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, this time I managed to express myselfΒ AND use rhyme. I guess this is an exeption to my own convictions.
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