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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave β€” Time to die
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Published: 2014-09-28 21:40:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 668; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description The time has come
I can't wait any longer
My mind is ready
Ending your life is a must

Tormenting me is all you do
Observe as I kill you

Don't be afraid
It won't hurt much
Every life comes to an end after all
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Comments: 42

EvilScarrlett [2014-10-12 20:57:06 +0000 UTC]

very well done, I hope you get a place in the contest!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-10-12 21:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. We'll have to wait and see

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EvilScarrlett In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-12 23:05:01 +0000 UTC]

you're welcomeΒ Β 

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angeluchiha7 [2014-10-07 19:27:34 +0000 UTC]

vary nice and creepy

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to angeluchiha7 [2014-10-07 20:55:33 +0000 UTC]

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wolfgirl2403 [2014-10-01 00:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Nice~ Dark and a bit creepy.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2014-10-01 03:24:23 +0000 UTC]

That's the point. Thanks

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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-10-05 18:57:29 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure~

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2014-10-05 21:25:13 +0000 UTC]

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nicoxmel [2014-09-29 09:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! I hope you win !

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to nicoxmel [2014-09-29 21:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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Thelunarwriter [2014-09-29 05:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Dark I like it good luck on the contest

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Thelunarwriter [2014-09-29 21:05:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Thelunarwriter In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-30 04:57:11 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Thelunarwriter [2014-09-30 21:36:06 +0000 UTC]

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Sracer25 [2014-09-29 03:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh at first I didn't know this was for a contest,and I was afraid you were about to kill yourself.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Sracer25 [2014-09-29 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]

It's not the first time I write about death. Not by a long shot... Sorry if I got you worried

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Sracer25 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-30 00:24:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah,no worriesΒ  Β 

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Sracer25 [2014-09-30 21:38:24 +0000 UTC]

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red-shepherds [2014-09-28 23:09:56 +0000 UTC]

IΒ like this, I may have to showΒ it to my best friend, he loves this kind of stuff.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to red-shepherds [2014-09-29 03:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And go ahead, the more the merrier

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AnnaBellLee17 [2014-09-28 22:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice job!

Everyone dies and you can't do anything about it.. you shouldn't fear death either.

but this reminds of something (two things): i wondered a lot about death and recently, when my parents were talking to me about age and responsibility, i got giddy at the fact i would be nearing the age to die. o_o

anyway, i really liked it. Β 

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to AnnaBellLee17 [2014-09-29 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

That's very true. Death is just a part of life.

Being alive is all it takes to die, right?

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AnnaBellLee17 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-29 20:35:04 +0000 UTC]

yeah, most definitely.... sort of amusing thought.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to AnnaBellLee17 [2014-09-29 21:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Amusing, you say? I find it scary.

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AnnaBellLee17 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-29 21:10:36 +0000 UTC]

we only are only alive to die.. sooner or later. Β to me, that is pretty amusing.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to AnnaBellLee17 [2014-09-29 21:33:43 +0000 UTC]

It's one of the harsh truth we must accept. If you find it amusing

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AnnaBellLee17 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-29 22:09:29 +0000 UTC]

i guess i do.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to AnnaBellLee17 [2014-09-29 23:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Up to you.

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LMW-The-Poet [2014-09-28 21:52:11 +0000 UTC]

The first few lines had me mumbling the lyrics to "Time of Dying"...
I like the killer perspective. It's open to enough interpretation to make it feel personal. (My mind brought me images of a certain bully's time to die.)

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to LMW-The-Poet [2014-09-28 22:05:28 +0000 UTC]

I can see why
I guess many people can relate to this in a way. After all, we all have someone we hate.

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warriorfann [2014-09-28 21:48:28 +0000 UTC]

Whoa....dark...... O.O

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to warriorfann [2014-09-28 22:03:13 +0000 UTC]

That's the idea

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UnNormality [2014-09-28 21:48:05 +0000 UTC]

.-. Β  Β  just described the feelings i have towards my family... lol... although it will be Very Very painful ^o^

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to UnNormality [2014-09-28 22:04:09 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't go to your family reunion...

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UnNormality In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-28 22:41:48 +0000 UTC]

xD My family are so far up their own a-holes they don't even have family reunions. If they did it would just turn into a massive argument

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to UnNormality [2014-09-29 03:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's a good thing they don't have these, if that's the case.

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LilacMistTheUnicorn [2014-09-28 21:45:20 +0000 UTC]

?

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to LilacMistTheUnicorn [2014-09-28 22:03:44 +0000 UTC]

It's for a Halloween contest, it has to be scary.

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LilacMistTheUnicorn In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-28 22:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to LilacMistTheUnicorn [2014-09-29 03:19:35 +0000 UTC]

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LilacMistTheUnicorn In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-09-29 20:03:31 +0000 UTC]

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