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glass-pixie — Puppeteer
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Published: 2008-02-06 05:43:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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PuppeteerContract, release
Contract, release
Is how I move
How I became this,
I have no clue
I stand, I dance
I stand, I dance
To this….
a silent tune
I mask, I play the part
I mask, I play the part
Wired and attached,
moving in my strings
I bow, they clap
I bow, they clap
For this is my end,
there will be no encore
I fall, I break
I fall, I break
This is for you,
my puppeteer
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Comments: 10
This is a good poem, very well done and the formatting really makes it.
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thanks corkee 
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Alright getting excited about returning to the hall!
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yeah lol I have training on monday lol, I saw yor bf's id pic he sent on his application to the hall, it was quite funny
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Very well put together.
Effective use of repetition. And the idea of life/performance in juxtaposition.
Simple. Which is also very effective.
Love it.
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Thanks, I changed the formatting of the poem because the original was just one major column does it work well?
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If you've looked at any of my work, you'll know that I'm a fan of format.
In this piece it's great. It just adds a little something to the flow that fragments and accentuates.
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Oh good, my stupid message thing isn't updating, I didn't even know you just sent me a mesage silly thing
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Well then.
Bet you won't even know this message hit ya
Btw, I don't know if you knew already I updated "Subordinate" to "Patches".
Took out the line you didn't like. I half agreed. Much happier with it now.
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