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Gloriagiraffe — (Cp/Horror Oc.) Randal The Human Rag Doll.
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Description
This character is not officially done, this will be edited when needed.
Criticism is Allowed, but be nice, don't be an ass about it.
Name: Randal The Human Rag Doll.
Real Name: Randy Login Deconde.
Nicknames: The Fleshy Doll, Randal, and Raggy.
Age: 25.
Age at Death: 25.
Gender: Male.
Species: Human Doll Possessed by its own ghost.
Personality: He used to be an every funny, open-minded, sweet, but also stubborn and Forgetful guy. After her death and becoming dead, he had now become low confident, depressed, vengeful, and sometimes aggressive, and lashes out at others like a normal ghost.
His person now as Randal, he is Nice, Helpful, Childish, Loyal, and Open minded.
Sexual Preference: Bisexual.
Relationship: Single and Probably won't ever change.
Date Of Birth: May 23, 1991.
Weight: 200.
Height: 5' 10"
Eye Color: Alive: Toasty Topaz. Dead: Fully Black.
Skin Color: Mixed Skin.
Hair Color: Coil Black.
Fears: (Thanatophobia.) Losing the people he loves (Mostly who were close to him while alive, mostly his kids.), (Pyrophobia.) Fire, (Basiphobia.) Falling, and (Acrophobia.) Heights.
Powers/Abilities: Can control two things, but not at once (His body and the doll.), and can't feel pain.
Weapons: Needles, and Anything around him.
How S/he kills/wounds in Combat: Because of him in his nicer persona, and his method of killing, which isn't much as purposeful as it's more like accidental manslaughter, but whatever. He doesn't get into fights or combat, but does fight back as if trying to struggle with a victim or for self-dense. He mostly just tries to use anything near him to hit you or make you die, or if he gets you while sleeping, he'll stitch you up to where you can't breathe and then die.
Weaknesses: Then through stabbing, kicking and etc doesn't hurt him, it can slow him down, water and fire, holy things, and destroying the doll or body he's in, to where it can't be used.
Strengths: Is good at hiding and sneaky, good climber, can distract others when needed, and does well at gaining others trust.
Cause of Death: Had many injuries, but mostly dead from having a ruptured blood vessel from being hit very hard on the wall.
History:
Randy was a somewhat normal man, he had gone to college, and after that started to date a woman, named Helen, who soon became his wife. They had four kids, one of the two being adopted and the other two being their own, but they all loved them anyway.
It was until one day when with Helen, their kids were at school and since they worked near each other, they sometimes went to lunch together.
The light was almost about to go back to red, but Randy thought they could get there before it did, so they ran, Helen not being the best at running being behind him a bit.
While they did the light turned red and someone driving on the road wasn't paying attention to the road and hit Helen really badly.
Randy saw this and was shocked and depressed at the same time, after that Randy had always blamed himself for her death, even though it was part of the drivers, he felt like it was mostly because of his choice.
He became depressed from this, but didn't let it get in the way of taking care of his kids.
After a while it was now, take your kids to work day, so he let them all come to his work.
While his kids looked around, one of his co-workers, Adam Jay, was watching them.
Adam Jay was a normal acting man, but when not at his day job, he works a company to where he'd sell the human doll, or make dolls out of human parts.
He had gotten a request from someone he is somewhat close to, he asked if he could make him a human doll, modeled after the toys that he had as a kid that he showed them ones, thinking it would be cool to see a human version of them.
While watching the kids, he saw that they would do perfectly for some of them, being his puppet, shadow puppet, the windup drummer boy, and an old doll he now uses as a voodoo doll.
While on break he tried to keep Randy or anyone away so he could kidnap his kids, and he finally did.
Randy saw them being gone and asked everyone around him, one of the workers told the other that Adam took them away into the parking lot, but before he could get to him he left work.
After the end of work, he got into his car and drove to his house, being that he was there before because of some of his coworker friends.
He tried to get in and saw that the door was open, he got in and looked around until he saw him, trying to harm his oldest daughter while his other kids were struggling to escape being tied up in ropes.
They both fight, he didn't care if he got in trouble for it, he just wanted to save his kids.
Adam had the better advantage, being way stronger and soon killed him.
Adam went on to killing the kids and then worked on making them look like toys, and make it to where they don't smell blood, except for the youngest girl, being the shadow puppet, he couldn't find a way to make it look like it, so he planned to just hide the body away. (After that the ghost of that kid seeing this and thought it would be fun made it look like the shadow puppet, it was dark, too, so, doing this would let her not be seen, because of her fear of the man.)
He then looked back at Randy's body and thought, he saw that he was perfect for the last one he had, which was a small rag doll.
He made it and went off to find a garbage bag to put the little girl's body in it until he heard a loud banging.
It made Adam annoyed as it got louder and louder, it was to where his neighbors could hear.
He heard one of his neighbors telling the police to come over, she being concerned about the loud noises.
He knew if this happens, he'd go to jail either way, but didn't know what to do with the bodies, he couldn't give them to him on time, or anything else like that.
He thought and got something, he cleaned them up a bit, put the toys they were modeled after with him, put them in his car as driven off.
Adam knows that there was a store at the mall how'd take homemade or weird stuff like this, it was a place that sold weird stuff.
He got there and sold them to it, he soon went back and took the punishment.
Adam was put in jail because they saw many human parts in there, being the things he took out of him and had the little girl's body on the floor.
A man went into the store, where he put the bodies with the dolls and the man bought it, after a few years the man didn't want it and put it in his yard sale and the story begins.
Place/Type of Residence: Doesn't have an exact place where he lives, being that he's taken by so many people.
Notes:
- His ghost possesses his own body.
- He uses his friends or the kids who own him's energy unknowingly.
- He believes that he is a doll.
- He doesn't remember anything from his past, because, if you saw how he died, he got hit really hard in the head, before he got killed by it the hit before the dead made him black out, not remember anything, but is still somewhere in his thoughts, also creating a persona for him, but still inside being a vengeful ghost.
- His sign is a Gemini, just a little fun fact.
Theme Song: None yet.
Further References: www.deviantart.com/users/outgo…
Relations (Family.): Helen Deconde (Wife, deceased.), Shirley Deconde (Youngest Daughter, Deceased, but still active.), Harley Deconde (Oldest, and Adopted Daughter, Deceased, but still active.), Caden Deconde (Youngest, and Adopted Son, Deceased, but still active.) and Jandon Deconde (Oldest Son, Deceased, but still active.)
Relations (Allies, Enemies, Neutral and Rivals.):
Allies:
- Eye
- Beastly Bear
- Strings The Human Puppet
- Vane The Voodoo Doll
- William The Wind Up Boy
- Shady The Shadow Puppet
( Will add more, if you want to just ask me.)
Enemies:
- The Police Force
- SCP
( Will add more, if you want to just ask me.)
Neutral: None.
( Will add more, if you want to just ask me.)
Rivals: None.
( Will have some soon, if you want to just ask me.)
Relations (Friends): Strings The Human Puppet (Close Friends, and are Related.), Vane The Voodoo Doll (Close Friends, and Related.), William The Wind Up Boy (Close Friends, and Related.), Shady The Shadow Puppet (Close Friends, and Related.), Eye (Good Friend.) and Beastly Bear (Great Friend.)
Bio sheet belongs to InvaderIka
Eye, Randal, Beastly, Strings, Vane, Willaim, and Shady belongs to Gloriagiraffe and Gloriagiraffe2
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Comments: 34
Well, your OC's are very interesting,
so maybe my CP OC Peter The Pupptes Maker and Dolly the Doll Maker ( both are twins)
can be friends with Randal ?
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Thanks! .3.
Maybe, We'll have to see how they will act well near each other.
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Would you like to start? .v.
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Hmm, sure )) BTW Peter and Dolly are kids, well Peter is possoes Puppte and Dolly is possess doll ))
Peter: - walking and playing his flute, as plays the song London Bridge Is Falling Down-
Dolly - walking along with her twin brother, as sing along with the song -
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Randal: * The owner who had his doll threw it out, not wanting that thing to come back, as you snook out and took it back when the person closed the door. He then walks around, not knowing the around he was in during that time.*
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Peter: it's a Doll ? - as gave the doll to Dolly -
Dolly: - hugs the doll - I wonder why, that man throw a beautiful doll?
Peter: maybe, he was getting to old ? Or thinks the doll was useless.....the poor Doll, it must be lonely, I know let's show our new friend to others,
Dolly: okay, - looks at the doll - don't worry little doll, you won't be lonely,
- as the twins started walking back to thier work shop, as Dolly continue holding the doll -
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Randal in the doll: *Thinks: "Dang it, I couldn't get my other body. Now I'm stuck here!", then listens to what Peter and Dolly say, and smiles from the cuteness on the inside, "Well ok then." he thinks, but no one can hear.*
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- as the twins arrived at thier work shop as there were a lot of pupptes and dolls almost look like children and there was a door that there was a sign that says: KEEP OUT ! -
Dolly: well little doll, welcome to our work shop - as she talks to the doll -.
Peter: sis,
Dolly: yeah,
Peter: I'm gotta finish my work,
Dolly: okay,
Peter: - walks into a room with the sign that said: KEEP OUT ! -
Doll: well, little doll, now it's just you and me....um...let's play tea party or dress up or both,....that would be fun ? um...what should I dress you up as ?...
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Randal: * Tries not to say anything, even though he was excited to hear about dressing up. *
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Dolly: maybe if I ask Peter ?...*puts the doll on a table next to a puppet, that has short neatly brown hair, eyes were bright green, he wears like the clothes from 1500's, but the puppte doesn't look happy* I'll be back little doll, I'm just gotta ask Peter, what should I dress up as ? *as walks though the same room*
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Randal: * He looks at the puppet and gives a concerned face.*
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Dolly: - continue talking to Peter -
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Randal: * He tries to comfort or help the puppet as much as he could.*
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Dolly: - finshed talking to Peter and walk out of the room as walking towards the doll - okay, I'm back little doll,
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Randal: * Stays compliantly still, staying in the way he was when he came back.*
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Dolly: - was holding some clothes that can fits the little doll - okay, I got some clothes that I could now dress you up - as she dress up you -
- couple minutes later Dolly, you, the other doll and the same puppet were sitting on each chairs having a tea party-
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Randal: *Feels very nice in the dress up clothes, but also is still a bit concerned for the puppet and dolls around him.*
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Peter: - walk out of the room, his clothes cover in blood as holding another puppet - Dolly, I'm finshed - as places the new puppet next to you -
Dolly: the puppet looks amazing, this is our lucky day, we got two new friends,
Peter: yep, but it's a shame we can't play Sam,
Dolly: yeah it's a shame, you could have play more game....but he won't he never leave
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Peter: I see that you're playing with the little doll,
Dolly: yep, do you wanted to play tea party?
Peter: as long I don't wear a dress
Dolly: aww, please Peter, just for onec, it's only just me,
Peter: - sigh - fine, I wear a dress, but don't tell anyone about it,
Dolly: I promise, - hands over a light pink dress with white roses that cover the dress-
Peter: - grabbed the dress -
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- few minutes later Peter puts the dress on as his arms were cross -
Peter: remind me, why I'm wearing the dress ?
Dolly: you lost the bet, but don't Pinky no one is gotta see in the dress, well except for me,
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(Okay, this one's gonna be shorter)
The design:
The design's alright, he's actually pretty creepy. The only thing I would really change is how he looks exactly like the doll.
The bio:
I love the personality and how it changes. So keep that!
The sexual preference is unneeded though. It says he's bi, but, would it really matter? Why don't you just put it as hetro? I mean, he married a woman and it seems like he won't be getting any other partners. So, why bother making him bi?
Okay, I actually really like how he doesn't need/doesn't want to kill people. He's just a creepy, possessed doll. I really like that, but the only thing I would change is how he sews people up while they sleep. I mean, does he follow people home or something, and other than self-defense, why would he kill?
The cause of death should probably be: Blunt forced trauma/ Murdered then made into a doll.
Okay, his height is very, very off. He should definitely not be 5' 1". That's the average size of a 12-13 year old. So, maybe you should change that to 5' 11" or up. It would sorta be awkward for his kids to be taller/near his height.
And for the doll size, 4' and under would be fine and if you want to make it 5' 1", I think that would be fine, since he's a ragdoll.
Okay, his history is actually pretty fine. I would work on the pacing and grammar mistakes though.
The only part I would change, would probably be how he saw the kids being taken and ran after them. Human dolls would take a long time to make, so how about he hears a commotion and sees his kids gone, calls the police, and he either finds out who it is and goes to confront him without telling anyone or Adam comes for him?
But if you want to go with him seeing his kids taken away, make sure Adam is never disturbed for a week/month.
Also, try to add a bit about his experiences as a ragdoll.
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Ok, I will take your words into consideration, I may or may not take what you say, but I will say I won't push this away.
I would go all out on my opinion on what you say, but I feel like it wouldn't do well and it would cause an argument that'll end up into a fight and I don't want that, but thank you for giving your opinion and I appreciate you giving the time to do this.
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Actually I think this would look pretty disturbing in real life ^u^
I did enjoy the story, but this character was not the thing that did.
I really like this Adam Jay fellow~
anyways, you still ave grammar to work on, and you did seem to copy paste from the other in which you did.
So yeah
Good on ya~
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Yeah.
Yeah, but there's stuff like that in any story, even in none horror stuff, mostly too, and yes Adam Jay a name I made up randomly because it's simply!
But still like the guy, even though he's now in jail and will probably get sentenced to death!
Yeah, I will try to fix those, and actually, I copied some of it from this one, is one being the first I posted from these humans toys.
And really each one is just told through another point of view, but also will have the same thing when it gets to some part, because except for Randal, there all is the same situation and places.
So, really I don't see much to do about that.
Thanks! >.<
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Yeah, he's pretty adorable as a dead corpse made to look like a rag doll. ^u^
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