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GoingOffTheDeepEnd β Mutter
Published: 2006-08-30 05:12:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Never there,Say you care.
Await your love,
Push and shove.
Played your game,
Still not tame.
Yet here I stay.
Lashing out,
Never pout.
Take it all,
Yet to fall.
Full of debate,
Mostly hate.
Yet here I stay.
Unaware,
In despair.
Unlike a dove,
Soars not above.
Here I proclaim,
Youβre to blame.
Yet here I stay.
Course I doubt,
You bring the drought.
Force me to crawl,
Make me feel small.
I leave the bait,
This is my fate.
Iβve gone away.
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Comments: 6
It rhymed. . . and made sense. . . genius! XD Heh, I really suck at poetry. Free verse is the only thing I can do.
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I'm sure you can do rhyming stuff, it just takes a really long time to think of the right words, and you keep on having to rewrite lines, but if I can do it, anyone can. So keep trying and I'm sure you'll get there!
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Thank you.
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No need to be gentle, I think you've done a great job.
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Thank you!
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