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gothdevil — Cruel World
Published: 2006-05-24 14:22:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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I’ve walked these streets of darkness,I have fought the wars of hell,
And yet after all this drama,
I have still done really well.
But I met a girl who loves me,
Even though I am blind,
She loves me so much,
I had to break out this rhyme.
People hating other people,
People wishing they would die,
This world is so messed up,
You might be killed over a little lie.
But her love protects me,
It keeps me more then safe,
It’s mine and her relationship,
Where goes all my faith.
States in-between us,
As well as miles in our way,
But we know we’ll be together,
Somehow as well as someday.
But you can’t write a poem about love,
Or even put care-bears into our lives,
Cause in the end, no matter what,
It hurts and stings, like a knife.
This is not a poems,
but yet my one true words,
Even with the drama in this world,
Our relationship will fly like the birds.
I know that she loves me,
And she really shows me care,
Our love will be un-stoppable,
Even though love is unfair.
These words will never express,
The love and hope I have for her,
But this world war drama,
Makes it hard to get to her.
People fighting everyday,
It’s on the streets the bodies lay,
I want her to know that I’ll be there,
Somehow, someday.
Comments: 15
waoh comparin your words you writen and mine...mine are dust,nothing compare to yours your truly amazing she most mean a L0-ot to you..love it!! :3
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Though it took me almost a year to reply
I am sorry, however do to personal past events on here, i thought it would be best i leave for a while.
I want to thank you for your comment
And thank everyone for the fact it has been a long time since i have logged on, but i now know my poems are still enjoyed
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this is amazing it makes me feel so much better about the world. really puts things into perspective and i think it can be interpreted by other people in different ways and i think thats what makes any poem so great...well done i love this poem its beautiful. XxxX nice wrk
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though it has been well over a year since you left me this comment, i want to thank you.
I needed time from here.
I look forward to seeing what you post next.
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may 26 2006, u said tea gets you through life? are you talking about the drink? but i like this piece you wrote. reminds me of my boyfriend....anywhonice work.
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thanks. Did you understand the point of it? I'm not callin you dumb or anything, but it makes sense to me, however when I read it out loud, it seems different.....
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i think i understand... though i've never been in love before... but i understand the kind of love that shelters you from the bad things in the world....
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tea, helps me get through this life....with really no problems. The way I look at it, all you need is love. I know there's more, however I am you could say " a lover ".....
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"a lover not a fighter"
heard that a couple of times
and not from Romeo and Juliet (though i do love that play)
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lol thanks. Does what I said make sense to you at all?????
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good stuff!!!!
i adore the rhyme and the rhythm!
very nice!
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