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Published: 2006-02-15 12:16:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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You made this promiseTo stay by my side,
A few months later
That was nothin but a lie.
If I’m dead to you,
Then let me go,
If I’m alive to you
Then let it show
Don’t hide your feelings
For me if their there,
Just tell me what’s up
Don’t make it unfair.
Everyday I cry for you,
Everyday my love is true,
Everyday you turn away
Everyday I’m dead to you
You still tell me you love me
Here and there,
But then if that’s true
Damn it make it fair.
You cut yourself
And say it’s me
But if you don’t love me,
Then why would you bleed?
I feel dead to you
I feel you lost you love for me,
But you say you still love me,
That’s really hard to see.
Comments: 8
HomicidalHampster [2006-02-17 01:14:18 +0000 UTC]
it's a good poem for it makes me cry....
Great job!
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gothdevil In reply to NK11 [2006-02-15 21:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Yea I know... Thank, and thanks for the fav on it!!!!!
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CarusimaHikura [2006-02-15 15:13:00 +0000 UTC]
<3 You write things that portray exactly how I feel.. You couldn't write this good if this poem wasn't true, so I hope everything looks up for you soon enough. In my opinion, you have done nothing to deserve pain...
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gothdevil In reply to CarusimaHikura [2006-02-15 21:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Yea I know, if I didn't write about what's true, I would never be the writter I am now. I did do something to get pain.... I fell in love at a young age. And the person I love makes a joke out of it. If she only know how much I suffer everyday. I love ad miss her so much. But there is nothing I can do about it but live.....
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