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Published: 2005-12-01 22:41:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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To cry to screamBecause of dreams,
Can be true,
It's, as it seems.
A dream of a love one
That has gone,
Will keep you up,
But, itβs love hold on.
The dream will repeat
From to dust to don,
You'll remember the moment,
Your true love moved on.
Under the midnight light,
With raindrops like a shower,
Pain will be intense,
For over an hour.
A dream can be true,
Or a memory of some kind,
Your heart will turn blue,
Cause true love is hard to find.
To live, to die
To feel, to cry
To breathe, to sleep,
Only makes the heart weep.
Fight for your friendship
Don't let it go,
Tell them everyday,
You love them so.
It may be over,
Over for good,
Let her know
What could still be.
Help her remember
All the good times.
Let her know
Your heart still floats.
Comments: 30
silverwind17 [2005-12-19 23:04:10 +0000 UTC]
I can't say I've lost true love, 'cause I don't think I've found it yet.
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gothdevil In reply to silverwind17 [2005-12-20 02:13:49 +0000 UTC]
it's great, well it can be..... Mine was for a while.....
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silverwind17 In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-21 01:17:23 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy for you I think everyone deserves that special someone...somethings just take time...
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gothdevil In reply to silverwind17 [2005-12-21 04:41:29 +0000 UTC]
yea I know Thanks.....
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silverwind17 In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-22 16:42:32 +0000 UTC]
Just tryn' to be friendly...
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silverwind17 In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-22 21:12:56 +0000 UTC]
They call me 'smillie' at work...
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silverwind17 In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-23 20:59:51 +0000 UTC]
hey, theres nothing wrong with a cheery disposition...I just also happen to be easily amused.
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silverwind17 In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-28 17:09:18 +0000 UTC]
yippee! I'm not the only one!~
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weepingtrees [2005-12-04 01:56:08 +0000 UTC]
I think, out of this entire poem, the stanza -
"Fight for your friendship
Don't let it go,
Tell them everyday,
You love them so."
Was the strongest for me. I've been having some issues holding on to friends, and so that really just made me smile. It's so, so true. Well written.
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gothdevil In reply to weepingtrees [2005-12-04 01:59:22 +0000 UTC]
thak you so much. I wrote that one because of a dream I had, can you tell? lol And I fought with that person that the dream was about just for friendship.....we are friends now...
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weepingtrees In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-04 02:06:02 +0000 UTC]
That's always good to here. Some day I might write a poem about a dream, if my dreams weren't so random and weird.
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gothdevil In reply to weepingtrees [2005-12-04 02:08:38 +0000 UTC]
yea well my deams have been the same one for the past few weeks, but the end different.....
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weepingtrees In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-04 02:29:19 +0000 UTC]
Is it a good kind of different, overall? Or bad?
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gothdevil In reply to weepingtrees [2005-12-04 03:11:47 +0000 UTC]
its good, as in nothin something you see everyday, thats why I like it.....
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weepingtrees In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-04 03:29:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's good, then.
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foxychobits [2005-12-03 01:56:42 +0000 UTC]
I like it!! I have something to tell you so please be home tomorrow!
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gothdevil In reply to foxychobits [2005-12-03 02:01:15 +0000 UTC]
i will be all day. Joey is stayin the night to night.....
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