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gothdevil — Good-Bye
Published: 2005-12-01 22:25:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 149; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Sorry you allI say " Good bye ",
For this world,
I have to die.
I've hurt to many people,
Hurt to many friends,
Hurt a special loved one,
Now this has to end.
I never meant to
Go so low,
For her heart
Took a blow.
I made her cry,
She wished she could die,
And now I know why
Most girls hate guys.
I messed up big,
I hurt her bad,
I hope she moved on,
Hope she's not sad.
I broke her heart,
Attacked her soul,
Cause I hurt her
Is why I must go.
She deserves better,
I hope she gets the best,
My death is comming,
Soon I'll be at rest.
I hope her life gets better,
I hope she moved on,
I wornder if she will
Notice that I'm gone?
I need to suffer,
For all the pain I've cause,
I shall kill myself,
Without a moments pause.
Comments: 14
That's really neat. It's like a - a rhyming suicide note. Which is what I assume it's supposed to be.
Actually, to be honest I don't know how to feel about suicide poems right now. I mean, quality wise this is great, but I just... Feel uneasy. Let's just say I got an unpleasent phone call today and leave it at that.
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at times I have thought about it, almost went through with it, but a real close friend of mine got me to change my mind. Now I dont know whyI ever even though about it......but yea you could say it was a suicide note.....
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Well, thank goodness for good friends, hey? I know what you mean, I don't know where I'd be without those precious family members society calls my friends. Probably dead by now, to be honest. Because no body knew what I was going to try. Nobody knew enough to try and stop me. But I knew well enough to keep going for them. Best choice I ever made.
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we are I wrote this about 2 weeks ago I think.....
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ok...just wanted to make sure...but I love it!! you did really good on it!!!!^^
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.......cool.......thanks......
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