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Published: 2005-12-07 22:30:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Tears of happinessBy your side.
You spreaded my wings,
You got me to glide.
You pulled me up,
And away from my past,
I opened up to you,
And fell in love fast.
My love is soild,
And never will be bold
My heart has been broken,
as you've been told.
I have no fear,
Pain or sorrow,
Because I know
I'll see you tomorrow.
Your love is perfect,
It gets me through the day,
If you need me, just say
I'll be right on my way.
You've made my heart stronger,
You filled it with real love,
You must be a gift,
That was sent to me from above.
I love you, I trust you
With all my heart,
I hope we'll always be together,
And never fall apart.
You have showed me life,
And how it really is,
You showed me that
Not all of it is bliss.....
Comments: 15
gaara-the-apple-king [2007-04-04 00:04:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice..i like it. Poems are like the third thing on my mind everyday. i love poetry.
and even for a quick poem this is really good.
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weepingtrees [2005-12-12 02:24:57 +0000 UTC]
I really like this one! My only beef is that 'spreaded' isn't a word.
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gothdevil In reply to weepingtrees [2005-12-12 04:25:43 +0000 UTC]
well, everyone knows what I mean, and it still gets the point across. LOL Thanks
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DmanLT21 [2005-12-10 01:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Nice. Quick poems can sometimes turn out quite well, especially if you get some good ideas and then elaborate on them later on.
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Asyd-Rayn [2005-12-07 23:25:56 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of how I feel about Daryl. I like this one. ^^
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gothdevil In reply to Asyd-Rayn [2005-12-07 23:47:51 +0000 UTC]
well, I know it's a good one if you like it.....lol.....I'm just messin.....Thank you.....
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