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Published: 2006-04-16 23:42:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 173; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Six months,Into the year,
Back in 03,
You healed a tear.
Six months in,
Eight-teen days through,
My heart and soul
Fell for you.
It lasted years,
Weeks, and days,
But at the end
There was nothing to say.
13 days,
After I turned 14,
I found my love,
I met my Queen.
To love, to hold
To have my friend,
It was perfect,
Until the end.
6 / 18 / 2003
That’s the meaning,
Of love to me,
But now that’s something,
That I no longer see.
I see no love,
Yet only hate,
Cause I lost you,
Never see love’s fate.
God....I love you.
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Hmmm. I like this one hun.... Very well written :d Nice Job baby Muahzz
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I never knew you made a poem about that day!!!!^^ I love it!!!
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yea i did. And No, no one knew about it.....
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i like this.. the exact dates make a clever contrast with the subject. really... even if it sounds corny and stuff, it makes the hole thing interesting. nice poem.
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nope.. you've misunderstood.. i meant.. even if i sound corny to say it makes a nice contrast, 
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it might sound corny, but it does what it needs to and get thye point across.....
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