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Published: 2006-02-23 22:01:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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The night of plunder,For my heart and soul,
These feelings are painful,
To kill them, I must go.
Away from my family,
Away from my friends,
Away from everyone,
for this is the end.
Wrist is bleeding,
River of blood,
Pain is easing,
I’m almost done.
My true love is gone,
My life is now through,
In about seven minutes
My body will be blue.
I hope she knows I love her,
I hope she knows I care,
but the feelings for her
I can no longer bare.
Blood on the razor,
Blood dripping form mt hand,
no longer will I suffer,
I’ll soon be dead.
I’m losing blood,
I fell so cold,
she still is my world,
My one and only gold.
Comments: 12
BabyNicki [2006-02-24 02:52:36 +0000 UTC]
HMMM nice baby..... better not even think about u i love youuu
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gothdevil In reply to BabyNicki [2006-02-24 03:08:03 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks sexy. I'm not dont worry....I love you
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gothdevil In reply to joedia123456789 [2006-02-24 01:19:44 +0000 UTC]
FUCK U DICK. I AM NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CarusimaHikura [2006-02-23 22:55:19 +0000 UTC]
Once again you have captured exactly how I feel..
I love your work so much <3 I need to start writing again..
I was amused with one line though...
"River of blood"
That's a nick-name for a friend of mine... We just got over fighting bad but are still in the after shoch of it.. I should show him this poem..
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gothdevil In reply to CarusimaHikura [2006-02-23 22:58:58 +0000 UTC]
lol Thanks, I wrote it today, when i got home from school.
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