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gothdevil — The Fuckin End
Published: 2006-04-01 04:04:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Fuck this world,Fuck this life,
Forget that girl,
Embrace this knife.
My love for her grows
Day by day,
But everytime I see her
It's " Stay the fuck away ".
Our relationship is over,
Her love for me is through,
But how can I live,
With my love for her so true?
I shall murder myslef,
For I can no longer stand,
All this damn maddness,
Within my head?
I know that's wrong,
For suicide can never be right,
But damn this pain,
It burns me inside.
Me and her,
Were together for years,
But at then end,
She was in nothin but tears.
In no happy mood,
No happy thought,
Just remembering,
All the times we fought.
I hate myself,
I 3want to die,
Cause no longer will I sit here
And do nothin but cry.
I waqs an ass
To her all the time
And now I feel bad,
But I need to pay for my crime.
Cut my neck,
Let no air in,
For when I lost her,
I lost my best friend.
I hope I suffer,
And die real soon,
The last thing I'll see,
Is this fuckin moon.
I cant believe I hurt her,
I cant believe I lied,
Because of all this,
Our relationship as died.
Fuck the world,
Fuck this life,
For I must now
Cut my voice with this knife.
Slice, Slice,
My voice it out,
But my love for her
Will live on with out no doubt
Comments: 23
Holy crap guy!! Powerful as always! You wrote this at a BAAAAAD time in your life,I remember,it's when I first started talkin to you,cause I was going through similar circumstances and knew your pain... I can only imagine how many poems like this you wrote,I know how prolific my writing was during that time.My writing is hidden away,even from myself,at the moment.Props to you for having the huevos to post your work though!
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wow its a cool poem............... but i do hope you feel better now!!!!!!!!!!!
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yea i do thank toy. I'm glad you like it.
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yeah its got pretty strong feelings.
I would like to ask what the hell you 've done to her but i don't stick my nose in other people bussiness.And i understand she is watching...................................
just take it easy life is short and we want to live it as more intensive as we can.even though intensive situation make us feel sometimes so wrong with our selves.
........................................................life is bitter and sweet in the same time.............................................................................
and as you grow ............pouf....................what can i say it gets no better but much different and believe me we become wiser.
much wiser!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I can tell you the whole story in one word..... well it might be two lol... " overprotective ".....
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who is around you......................lol......................something happened and it erased
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i can tell you three very important words that realy matter for everybody who :
BE MORE POSITIVE
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that is awesome!!!! i love your poem!!!!!! its great!!!!!
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Thanks, I'm glad.....
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NICKI, please dont start sayin all stuff you said last time i posted ap oem like this. Someone wanted to see it.
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Wel atleast I know you know where the . is on the keyboard.....lol
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lol i love you. so do u know where anything else is on the keyboard?? lmao
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