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Published: 2005-12-17 20:55:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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In the sun,Or in the moon,
No matter where,
You shall see me soon.
Hide in your closet,
Hide in your room,
No matter where,
You shall be doomed.
For I am evil,
For I am sin,
For I'm the one
Who hates within.
For the feeling of love
That I once shared
Is to painful of a thought
I can no longer bare.
For now I’ve unleashed hate.
I hate love
For there is no “ loves fate “
If someone did love me,
It’s far too late.
I’ve lost love
From someone near
I’ve lost her love
It’s oh so clear…
Evul has got me
Evil has won
For evil turns to sin,
I’ve unleashed hate within.
Comments: 30
Etherealopolis [2005-12-21 02:27:32 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I found my way here. I had that in me for many years. In a weird way I owe it for it kept me going when I had nothing but. Today we owe each other nothing. The world does, not "is."
And I'm adding you. It won't hurt a bit.
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foxychobits [2005-12-19 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]
...it kind of scares me...not being able to escape even when in the bedroom closet????????.............you are dooming people and its not a good thing...j/k..... you did really good. Proud of you
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foxychobits In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-19 11:17:35 +0000 UTC]
yes it is a thanks* that you should give I was giving you a compliment. ^^ byes!!
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gothdevil In reply to foxychobits [2005-12-19 19:23:14 +0000 UTC]
yea, but you said it " scares " you.....
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foxychobits In reply to gothdevil [2005-12-20 11:33:14 +0000 UTC]
well..it does.*said with a twisted smile *^^
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DmanLT21 [2005-12-18 06:44:16 +0000 UTC]
Hey great poem! I really like the beginning. It's kinda diffrent than you other ones, I like it.
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gothdevil In reply to DmanLT21 [2005-12-18 16:39:36 +0000 UTC]
it's a ;ot different the my other ones.... I'm glad you like it though...!!!
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HomicidalHampster [2005-12-18 04:08:23 +0000 UTC]
wow, is this true feelings? It's really good!
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gothdevil In reply to HomicidalHampster [2005-12-18 04:28:01 +0000 UTC]
yea it is.... Thakn you!!!!
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