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gothdevil — Water Fall
Published: 2006-04-23 06:28:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Water fall of blood,From what my eyes cry.
The pain of the thought,
That i could never help her fly.
Blood dripping of my fingers,
And on to the floor,
So much blood flowing,
Right under the door.
Door to my heart,
Closed so tight,
What I did to her,
Was way beyond right.
Couldn't get a grip,
On all that was going on,
So what I managed was
To make everything wrong.
I tried to control her,
But all i controled was my fall,
She packed my shit up,
And sent me right down the hall.
Walking out and away,
With thoughts going to my heart,
I realized the reason,
Our relationship fell apart.
Water fall of blood,
Tears of pain,
I'm glad she go rid of me,
For I made her go insain.
I love this girl,
I love her to death,
I'll always love her,
Even after my last breath.
Water fall,
Please bleed away,
Maybe we'll be together again,
Some hoe, some day.
Comments: 25
ohh!! i write poems too you should look at my PAGE!!! i love your poems!!
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Thanks.
You write poems really well, good job!!!
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awwwww your sweet 
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Ummmm. I have no comment but.. Hope your happy. Coz. Thats the last straw. Pe@ce *Crying*
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What?? Like the mother fucking signiture? Lmao Have Fun With Her lmao Pe@ce
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hey Nicki , do me a fav will ya plz.....
1 - forget my number.
2 - forget me
3 - keep this off deviant.
4 - take all this, and stick it up your ass
No one will come between me and poetry/writting. Not you. Not chey, Not death, Not time. Fuck you. you know, there is one thing chey had over you. Dhe didn't have a single problem with what I wrote, she knew / knows it is just thoughts put into words. Take me off your damn list, or i'll see about contactin deviant and see if I cant have you removed for harrassment. STAY OFF / AWAY FROM MY PAGE!!
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ummmmmmmmm......................
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I love it..... being stunned speechless does not normally happen to me, but it is now..... 
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thanks. And damn, dont spank my ass so hard. I didn't know for my 17th birthday i was goin to get the hell beat outta me.....lol
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lol...oohhhhh and sooooo much more!!^^
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the story of my life!!!!
nice poem ..................i think you should keep on writting!!!!
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May I ask who it is the story of your life?
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
And I love to write, but I have nothing to write about, Most of mine for the past while have been nothing but like death, or suicide, and thats not me, thats not what I used to write and I'm tired of it. I want to write something like my first poem " Losing You ", but I have nothing to write it about that wouldn't be the same as everything else but in different words that I have written.
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Saying this i meant that as you , i and everybody else grows up, we meet these feelings again and even stronger and thinking later of these stories make us laugh and be thankful that we went through all this pain cause it makes us stronger every time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yea, i have heard that alot, but no one can 100% mean / say that, cause every pain memory still can hurt in the comming of life.
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