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GothicDevil — Black - Red - Blue
Published: 2006-06-09 13:58:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Black is the night time,
As Death glides in your door,
Red is your blood,
In a pool on the floor.

Blue are your eyes,
Unseeing and cold,
Each slit on your wrist,
Another hurt left untold.

(chorus)
We all search for reason,
A worthy cause to live,
With faith's riddled treason,
Don't be deceived (please don't be deceived).

Black are the tears,
Burning our eyes,
Red is the anguish,
Of each sudden demise.

But blue, blue are the hopes,
Set aside for you,
Words of warning,
These words all ring true.

(chorus)
We all search for reason,
A worthy cause to live,
With faith's riddled treason,
Don't be deceived, please don't be deceived.

Black is the veil,
Of Misery's door,
Red is the blood,
Yet to spill on the floor.

Blue is the sea,
Of regret and lies,
Weathering each storm,
Waiting patiently to die.

(chorus)
We all search for reason,
A worthy cause to live,
With faith's riddled treason,
Don't be deceived, please don't be deceived.

Yes, blue are the hopes,
Set aside for you,
Another fucking night,
Of black, red and blue.
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Comments: 28

shahath [2006-06-10 17:19:33 +0000 UTC]

You have a knack for rhyming, it seems. I noticed while you do so, it's both rhythmic and sane, and those two qualities are two not meant to be left neglected. I enjoyed this immensely, I look forward to more of your work.

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GothicDevil In reply to shahath [2006-06-10 17:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou.. I'm glad you enjoy my work, I hope I can keep doing good work for ya to enjoy

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misslost [2006-06-10 02:40:55 +0000 UTC]

write a tune to it its perfect!!

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GothicDevil In reply to misslost [2006-06-10 02:44:17 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how, lol I don't play anything rofl... Really you think it's perfect?... and thankyou for adding it to your favourites

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misslost In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-10 03:07:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. the rhyming, the words

hmmm.. must think of a way to sing it

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GothicDevil In reply to misslost [2006-06-10 03:16:08 +0000 UTC]

I can't sing lol... Yay maybe I can ask a friend of mine to help.. Well i'm glad the rhyming is good for ya

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misslost In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-11 04:07:20 +0000 UTC]

get someone else to sing it...

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GothicDevil In reply to misslost [2006-06-11 04:33:27 +0000 UTC]

I will try and find someone

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misslost In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-11 04:39:49 +0000 UTC]

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nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-09 14:36:28 +0000 UTC]

Yup. That tears it...the closet it is. You're damn good at this, do more!!!

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GothicDevil In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-09 14:49:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm not really, but I try.. I'm glad you liked it, thanks do you want me to do another one?

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nevergetfooledagain In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-09 15:22:40 +0000 UTC]

YES!! Or it's the closet for you..

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GothicDevil In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-09 16:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Lol okay okay, I post one some time today your time

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nevergetfooledagain In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-09 16:39:10 +0000 UTC]

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l0stwhispers [2006-06-09 14:29:55 +0000 UTC]

I like the last two lines. Another fucking night of black, red and blue. XD Ok, I'm insane. Anyway, me likes. As usual. Why not blue-black red? Blue-black get it? Bruises... heh. Ok, nvm.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-09 14:49:00 +0000 UTC]

I did think of that title but then I thought meh fuck it i'm not going to damn it I should

Yay i'm glad you liked it .. Yes yes you are insane

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-09 14:50:46 +0000 UTC]

I know I'm insane. You don't have to repeat me, y'know. Psh. xP

Dum dee dum.

Bruises all over. I'm in pain, gimme a flower.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-09 14:53:13 +0000 UTC]

*hands you the flower, then eats it*

I'm not copying you, don't worry i'm not going to change it, I like the way it is now

I burnt my hand

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-09 14:55:26 +0000 UTC]

How?! O.O See... zee poem izz a curze! Get reed of eet alreadeh! Aaahhh!!! And damn you for eeteeng mee floweh! Psh!

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-09 14:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Nope I won't I like it.. What's wrong with it?

Yep damn me but it was nice

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-09 15:07:25 +0000 UTC]

I want one too. -whines- xP And hm... the poem burnt your hand.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-09 16:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Lol you want a poem too?.. Lol damn straight it did.. Ah I tried to have a nap.. I woke up feeling really sick and over heated.. Damn heater and 4 shirts a jumper and two blankets

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-10 02:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Like d'oh... you're just asking to get up and feel sick and overheated.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-10 02:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Lol no shit, I did it again when I went to bed at 5am gosh one of these nights i'm going to day.. lol now i'm sick

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-10 13:41:41 +0000 UTC]

"one of these nights i'm going to day" Wha? -does not understand your phrasing- xP Ah well. I can take care of you if you want.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-10 16:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Um fucked if I know lol... I don't understand my phrasing either, I just go with the flow Oh I like that idea

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-10 16:29:21 +0000 UTC]

xP You're just weird.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-10 16:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Damn straight I am, it's better than to be normal

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