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GothicDevil — Confessions Guilty
Published: 2006-05-02 15:01:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Pain
       Tension
                   Fatigue
                              Depression

Anger, Aggression, Frustration

All these unwanted sensations

Burning
            Hurting
                        Tearing

My heart alone, cold and fearing
Why won't you let me sleep, let me rest
Let me forget
To eradicate, eliminate, destroy all my regrets?
These memories inside, swirling, twirling
unwilling to reside in the corner of my mind

Repeating
               resisting
                            insisting

Refusing to be denied its recognition
Of its position in my

Frustration
                Confusion
                                Delusion

Ah, to close my eyes and let time fly by
Because there's so much to gain
By forgetting these dreams driving me insane

Unfocused
               unclear
                          out of control

My world spinning, spinning, spinning
My sanity flying through the door
My reason, my logic, oh, it's tragic
Like fine sands running through my hands
I'm losing my mind
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Comments: 17

pippieemo [2006-06-11 02:47:11 +0000 UTC]

This poem reminds me SO much of Girl Anachronism by the Dresden Dolls. Good work!

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GothicDevil In reply to pippieemo [2006-06-11 02:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Lol oh really?

Coolies hehe.. I'm glad you liked it, and thankyou for adding it to your favourites

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Princess-Amy [2006-05-07 08:12:48 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely.. the arrangement of the poem really brings out the anger in it

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-05-07 10:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, i'm glad that you like it

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-05-07 10:57:54 +0000 UTC]

^^ ya i did

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-05-07 11:00:40 +0000 UTC]

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-05-07 11:03:19 +0000 UTC]

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-05-07 14:58:40 +0000 UTC]

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-05-07 15:03:12 +0000 UTC]

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l0stwhispers [2006-05-06 15:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear, I do hope you aren't going mad. I like the arrangement. Makes the whole structure seem confusing, yet somehow fitting.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-05-06 17:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry i'm not going mad

Thankyou

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HalfMunchkin [2006-05-03 03:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Describes my life. I can relate.

I think the poem is fine the way it is.

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GothicDevil In reply to HalfMunchkin [2006-05-03 08:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Well i'm glad it can relate you, and i'm also greatful that you like it

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Celenai [2006-05-02 16:01:45 +0000 UTC]

I like the vividness of this piece, but you need more imagery to tie it down a bit more and make it more than just a rant of a collection of big words describing an emotion.

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GothicDevil In reply to Celenai [2006-05-02 16:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I thought the big words would be good to feel in how the feeling is in the poem, but you are right more imagery would be good oh well .. Again I'm glad you liked it other wise

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Celenai In reply to GothicDevil [2006-05-02 16:38:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha. It's like, wihtout proper imagery you lose sight of what can make the poem feel really realistic and appeal to may many ppl. But I did like it overall.

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GothicDevil In reply to Celenai [2006-05-02 16:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough.. Well I am still glad you liked it

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