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GothicDevil — Hold Me Down
Published: 2006-05-10 16:10:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Hold me down
envelope your arms around me
etch your brandings into my skin
let the world know what you have
and what they can't take away

Whisper sweet nothings
let your words lick my shame
hold me down
in case I squeeze from your grip
and find a way to slip loose

Prick my skin
find your own way under
target the pain
hold me down
i'll be fine once the burning is over

Let the sensation ride
take its toll
let me rest a bit
but all the while
hold me down
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Comments: 4

NovembreChuchote [2006-05-17 15:23:08 +0000 UTC]

I love that your tone was a mix of something sweet and something rough. You're all misleading like that n stuff

Let the wolrd know what you have
and what they can't take away

those were my favorite lines.

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GothicDevil In reply to NovembreChuchote [2006-05-17 23:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, aww well i'm called you liked my tone

Awww cool, they are good lines but I don't have a favourite

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l0stwhispers [2006-05-13 07:10:05 +0000 UTC]

Hm... I like how you ended with the same words you started. Emphasises it so much more. And well, hm... I'm trying not to think dirty here. xP

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-05-13 11:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Lol don't think dirty

I'm glad you liked it

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