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GothicDevil — I'm your wish master from hell
Published: 2006-06-16 18:28:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Tell me your wish,
I can fulfill,
That you’ll forever cherish,
And your death, I will kill.

Want to rule your grave,
Tell me don’t fear,
Just be brave,
And show me not your every single tear.

I am here for you,
Your desire is my command,
I will make everything true,
Just give me your unsure hand.

Want to become the god,
Don’t be shy,
Sense no odd,
I can even slay, who made you cry.

For you I can bring the heaven,
Just consent,
Your every grant will be given,
Even the angels will be sent.

I am the wish master,
From the hell,
Tell me quick, be faster,
Some where else the deal, I’ll sell.

Human be greedy,
And say yes to all these,
I am not here to stay forever,
Otherwise your life I’ll take.
And then keep crying, no one will ever help.
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Comments: 18

zootlocker [2006-06-19 12:40:31 +0000 UTC]

...your name is Jessie? eeek! I used to go out with a jess...scary girl that one, I still have the scars (yes physical)...
Which leads into my critique! (ok, not really) I often find myself thinkin bout others first but...yeah different feeling I suppose! Again, I find your view interesting (if not refreshing) keep it ups!

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GothicDevil In reply to zootlocker [2006-06-19 12:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Heheh yepmy name is Jessie has been for about 16 years hehe oh no that isn't good she seems scary.. Yeah your the same as me then.. Ah well tat is good that you found it interesting even refreshing i'm glad you like my poems I'll try to keep you pleased with them

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zootlocker In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-19 23:18:57 +0000 UTC]

^_^ YAY!

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GothicDevil In reply to zootlocker [2006-06-20 08:15:12 +0000 UTC]

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l0stwhispers [2006-06-18 01:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Hm... this one's not as good as the other one you wrote yesterday. xP The rhymes are a little off like "command" and "hand". Hm.. or maybe we just pronounce it differently. Heh. xP Anyway, I like the whole concept of it. Unique.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-18 03:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah well sorry about that... Lol command does little bit rhyme with hand.. Yay i'm glad you liked it a little bit .. Hehe

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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-18 11:02:21 +0000 UTC]

You're real funny, y'know.

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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-18 14:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Hehe yes I am

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Princess-Amy [2006-06-16 18:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-06-16 19:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-16 19:44:18 +0000 UTC]

wilkommen honig

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-06-16 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Um what did you say?

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-16 19:57:11 +0000 UTC]

lol.. thats welcome honey in german

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GothicDevil In reply to Princess-Amy [2006-06-16 19:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Lol oh

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Princess-Amy In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-16 19:59:28 +0000 UTC]

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X-Cold-Hearted-X [2006-06-16 18:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... impressive Jessie...

Is there a reason you stopped capitalizing your I's near the end?

Anyways, I can see what you're trying to say, but it comes off more as a helpful allie.. or rather, a servant, but-not-quite instead of... more of a submissive friend...

*Shrug* Who cares, that really really blew me away

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GothicDevil In reply to X-Cold-Hearted-X [2006-06-16 19:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou Blackie... Um nope I didn't know, I thought I was capitalizing everything .. Hehe yes I know that also, but I thought putting submissive was a better way to put it ... I think you care lol... I hope it didn't blow you away to far I'm glad you liked it Blackie

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X-Cold-Hearted-X In reply to X-Cold-Hearted-X [2006-06-16 18:52:41 +0000 UTC]

And by allie, I mean ally...

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