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Published: 2006-06-23 15:51:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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Description
Please sit down,Let me ask you a question.
Do you know why you
Have this obsession?
That obsessive hate,
You carry around with you,
Can you tell me the reason,
You think the way you do?
When you walk down the street,
And see a soul with no home,
Do you offer them some change,
Or continue that call on your phone?
Do you turn your head In disgust,
Or reply with a rude remark?
What do you hold against this person,
Who sleeps alone in the dark?
As you continue down your street,
You pass two teenagers in love,
Two males holding hands happily,
A relationship they are proud of.
Your face doesn't understand,
They're just young and confused,
No, they are gay and in love,
Because of this wrong is accused.
These are just a few
You can pass in one day.
In the rest of your life
No, this won't go away.
What did these people do
To make you hate them so?
They're living in the modern world,
Can't you let it go?
No crude remarks,
No disgusted glares,
No two faced comments,
Because you don't care.
Now this is true reality,
Maybe you need a helping hand.
What goes around comes around,
Why hate those you don't understand?
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Comments: 22
SpawnandThorn [2006-12-08 09:01:18 +0000 UTC]
I am in awe because it is soo true, I wrote a couple writings that basicly are about society but I lost them. And this writing of yours, is just amazing...
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GothicDevil In reply to SpawnandThorn [2006-12-08 16:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou, i'm truely amazed you like my poem about it =]
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shahath [2006-06-27 00:50:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, yes, I saw it. I see it all. I love the connotations and fuckin' society, it's true. Jesus, this was great.
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GothicDevil In reply to shahath [2006-06-27 05:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Lol thankyou so much cutie for the favourite, i'm glad you liked it and enjoyed it did I tell you that someone who has a record deal wants to put that poem on a album.. I'm so happy you enjoyed it and yes it is true..
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l0stwhispers [2006-06-24 08:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Go you! Hm... a song popped into my head. But, I can't be bothered to remember the title and the singer. Psh. xP Anyway,
loved this and the way it flowed.
xP
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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-24 09:56:58 +0000 UTC]
Yay me lol fair enough.. Sorry I can't help you there with the song
.. I'm glad you liked it and enjoyed it and thankyou for the favourite on it
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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-24 10:54:29 +0000 UTC]
Meh. My sis just told me the song title. Crazy by Simple Plan. D'oh. Me and my hopeless memory. XD
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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-24 12:59:47 +0000 UTC]
It's not such a bad song. -whacks-
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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-24 15:58:08 +0000 UTC]
But it's by Simple Plan
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l0stwhispers In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-25 02:51:33 +0000 UTC]
Yea. But I likes Simple Plan!
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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-06-25 04:53:09 +0000 UTC]
I know and it's disgusting
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HalfMunchkin [2006-06-24 04:41:15 +0000 UTC]
That pretty much sums up how the world is. Hate as a result of ignorance. If we could get rid of the ignorance, maybe the hate would dissappear.
Thank you for creating this poem.
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GothicDevil In reply to HalfMunchkin [2006-06-24 05:54:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah but ignorance will never disappear, no problem and thankyou for adding it to your favourites
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GothicDevil In reply to misslost [2006-06-24 03:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Aww thankyou, i'm glad you liked it, and enjoyed it.. Thankyou for the favourite
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zootlocker [2006-06-24 03:17:41 +0000 UTC]
n_n...yes I'm mainstream...so I'm goin to blame the individual...
Why? Cause I still agree with you. We're not all screwed in the head...but a lot of us are, lol.
Here is to a change.
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GothicDevil In reply to zootlocker [2006-06-24 03:37:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol yay for you agreeing with me .. Yeah that is true
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zootlocker In reply to GothicDevil [2006-06-24 09:30:26 +0000 UTC]
Not entirely, but close enuf...
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GothicDevil In reply to nevergetfooledagain [2006-06-24 03:39:54 +0000 UTC]
Awww i'm sure they will
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