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Published: 2006-03-25 06:58:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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The tears are fallingMy mind is racing
My heart is aching
The tears are falling
My body is hurting
My soul is bleeding
The tears are falling
My breathing is shallow
My eyes are sore
The tears are falling
My voice is silent
My screams not heard
The tears are falling
My thoughts are scrambled
My judgement is poor
The tears are falling
My courage is failing
My spirit is weak
The tears are falling
My pain is so raw
My being is lost
The tears are falling
Will they ever stop?
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Comments: 13
sweetasthyblackrose [2006-03-26 00:00:16 +0000 UTC]
great poem, it goes on and tells you how much you hurt... and then ties it all together
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GothicDevil In reply to sweetasthyblackrose [2006-03-26 01:32:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it does, thankyou, i'm glad that you liked it
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HalfMunchkin [2006-03-25 15:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Feel better soon. If you need to talk, you have many friends here you can talk to, me included.
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GothicDevil In reply to HalfMunchkin [2006-03-25 21:14:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but I will be fine
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l0stwhispers [2006-03-25 14:12:42 +0000 UTC]
Is it true hun? 'Cause if it is, you can always tell me alright?
I know I'm not always there but well...
Just drop me a note or something. And yes, you did make it sound very real.
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GothicDevil In reply to l0stwhispers [2006-03-25 14:45:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is true
Thanks but I will be okay on my own
... Yay I'm glad you like it
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