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Description Brotherly discipline
Age order:
Manic-Oldest: he's more calm, crafty and mature
Sonia-Middle child: she likes the material possessions and attention
Sonic-Youngest: he's hyperactive and likes to have his own way all the time

Pretty valid reasons, don't you think? Its just a theory, its ok if you don't like it, I don't like Manic being the youngest either but I accept it. Anyway, this has non-sexual spanking in it, its more...corporal punishment in it. I'm thirteen and I got a fever right now, what do you want from me?
And oh yeah, I'm calling Robotnik; Eggman. He doesn't appear anyway.

The ride was full of annoyance and complaints "I can walk faster than this thing!...then again, I can do anything faster" Sonic grinned in a show-off way. Manic rolled his eyes with a groan, he'd been driving for five hours straight and during that time, all Sonic had done was complain, moan, nag and complain some more. He cast a glance to Sonia, she had the same expression on her face so obviously the feeling was mutual. Sonic groaned "Where are we goin' anyway?" he asked
"To the cell blocks in 'no mans land'. Its abandoned and I think we can use them for enemy spies" Sonia explained "I told you already!"
"Well, maybe it was so boring I tuned it out the first thousand times" Sonic sighed. Sonia clenched her fists "I'll see ya later. This hedgehog's gonna scout ahead in style" he started walking to the van doors
"No way bro! We gotta stay together, its a jungle around here. Full o' traps and spies" Manic told him
"No problemo! If anything comes up  I'll-"
"Just stay in the van!" Manic snapped, feeling his blood pressure rising. Sonic rolled his eyes
"Ok, ok, chill!" he sat back down, tapping his fingers in an irritatingly bored motion. Manic groaned, the temptation to strangle him was too much right now.
Sonia leaned over and whispered to Manic "Manic. He's a brat. I can't take it!"
"I know how you feel" Manic whispered back
"Your oldest! You handle it!" Sonia hissed
"Ok, ok. I'll think of something" he assured. It was true, when they'd been fighting about who was older and not being able to tell because they were triplets, they asked the oracle and he'd revealed their age orders. Sonic was pretty peeved at being the youngest though.
When they arrived in No man's land, Sonia was grateful, she loved Sonic but he was being a complete pain in the neck right now "And what now?" Sonic asked
"Easy, we find our guide...there he is!" she pointed to a wolf wearing a turban who was coming over to them "Ah! There you are, I was worried I'd have to reschedule" he smiled warmly
"Yeah, yeah, enough chit chat. Lets go, my feet are itchin' for some action!" Sonic whined. Manic nudged him with his elbow
"shut it!" he hissed. The guide smiled
"Its ok. Come, I'll show you the cell blocks" he lead them underground somewhere
"Manic. Did you think of something?" Sonia whispered, referring to their earlier conversation
"Yeah...sorta. I'm not gonna tell ya right now though. Don't worry, I'll use it when I have to" he assured. Being calm did have its advantages to his thinking.
"This place is soundproof and extremely hard to get out of. Masses upon masses of escape tunnels we dug inside the cells to keep the prisoners in. It saves room. Or it did...until they said it was a safety hazard and inhumane, so it was abandoned. But it can still be put to good use against Eggman" he explained. Sonia nodded
"hmm...well, if we take it, we can fix that up" she reasoned
"Would you like to see inside the cells. You can take the keys inside if you don't trust me, I'll come too" he said, opening a cell and going inside. Manic shrugged
"Why not?" they went in, it was pretty scary, dark, dank and stinking. Sonic tapped his foot impatiently
"We came, we saw, its boring. Lets go"
"Sonic!" Sonia hissed
"You know, my people built all of this over fifty years ago" the guide continued

"Yeah, well couldn't your people build something useful?" Sonic asked rudely. Manic, who was silently fuming at the time, snapped at his rudeness
"Ok! That's It! Sonia, please take our guide elsewhere. I have to...talk...to Sonic" he seethed. Sonia was shocked at his sudden outburst; Manic was normally so calm and collected. When he lost his cool, it wasn't pretty. She nodded "Ok...come on, I wanna see...the uh...structure designs! Do you have them?"
"Of course!" she and the guide left.
Sonic continued to tap his foot "Oh great, another lecture...Well, might as well get it over with" he sighed. Manic felt his eye twitch
"Oh, I'm not gonna lecture ya. But you'll wish I had once I'm done with ya" he advanced. Sonic didn't like this tone that Manic was taking, it made him nervous, especially when he advanced on him
"n-now hold on there bro! D-don't do something you'll regret!" he backed off, only to have Manic grab his wrist, drag him out, sit on a boulder and haul him over his lap. Sonic struggled "Hey! Manic! L-Lemme up! Jokes over!" he cried. Manic positioned him carefully and placed a hand on the small of his back, he was making sure that he couldn't Sonic spin his way out, he wanted this to be just right. Unfortunately, Sonic was putting up more of a fight than first thought. Manic grunted "Quit struggling! Your only making this worse for yourself" he told him sternly
"As if! I didn't do anything!" Sonic defended
"Really? Well, lets review! Your rude to people and your annoying! Your acting like a little brat! And brats need to be punished!" Manic seethed, taking the material of his glove in his teeth and pulling it off, then after he spat it out, he raised his hand in the air and delivered a painful slap to his brother's bottom, causing a hiss from Sonic. Manic could tell he wasn't going to make it easy so he decided to go in a hard rhythm. He delivered slap upon slap to his brother's rear. Sonic hissed and suppressed whimpers 'Not gonna cry! Not gonna give him the satisfaction!' he thought suddenly. Manic frowned and increased the speed and strength of his slaps, turning Sonic's rear red. Sonic started to tear up, he couldn't stop them seeing as he was using all of his might to not sob. Manic caught him by surprise on the undercurve of his bottom and that caused him to yelp out again and again. Manic wasn't just stopping there though "I'm. Gonna. Make. Sure. You. Learn. Something!" he punctuated each word with a slap to his thighs. Sonic couldn't take it any more, he'd felt pain before but nothing was so intense as this
"M-Manic! Stop!" he cried out, choking on a sob "i-it h-h-hurts!"
"Duh!" Manic spat, slapping harder. Sonic started sobbing hard against his own will
"Stop it p-please!"
"Not. Yet!" Manic hissed. He delivered thirty more swats each to his bottom and thighs before finally stopping for breath. Sonic ceased his kicking and broke down into sobs. Manic noticed him and hauled him on to his feet "Ok. Now into that corner!" he pointed to one of the cells. Sonic looked back at him with tear stained eyes
"b-but..."
"GO!" Manic demanded, making Sonic jump but comply. His legs were shaky so he couldn't walk very well. Manic grabbed his arms and pulled him into the corner "Stay there with your hands on your head! If I come back and find their not there, then I'm gonna be REALLY angry!" he snapped. Sonic did as he said. Manic nodded with satisfaction as he took his glove off the ground and slipped it back on "I'm gonna find Sonia to see where she is. I'm gonna lock the gate. You can spin your way out, but we'll never talk to you again if you do, especially not after your behaviour" he explained, locking the gate and leaving. He was by no means any softer than he was before.
Sonic was left alone with his thoughts 'stupid! Why'd he do that?' he bitterly tried to bite back a sob but with no use 'Its not like he had to! He could have just lectured me! I would have paid attention...eventually' he thought 'probably would have...could have...' he was starting to reflect on his personality now. He shook his head, tears splattering all over the place. He was too aware of the phenomenal burning sensation in his butt, who'd have thought Manic would lose his cool like that? 'is he really that mad?...would they be happier if I wasn't here?...' this caused even more tears to run down his cheeks with more audible sobs.
Manic looked at his watch, he'd found his sister and the guide so right now he was just waiting for Sonic to learn his lesson and for himself to cool down. Sonia found the courage to speak "maybe you should go to him?" she suggested. Manic grunted with a small nod
"I guess. You guys wait here, it'll be kind of embarrassing, for him anyway" he explained
"Sure. What'll we do in the meantime?" she asked. Manic shrugged
"I don't know. Your smart, think of something" he said as he walked out. Sonia sighed and looked to the guide
"So...tell me one more time how this building was founded..."
Manic took his time going down the corridors, trying to piece together what he was going to say 'for some reason, I don't think sorry is going to cut it. Plus, I shouldn't have to apologize!' he though stubbornly but shook his head 'no...I see how we're related. We're both stupidly stubborn' he knew he was getting close when he heard Sonic crying. He sighed and leaned against the cell bars "You can take your arms down now" he told him. Sonic heaved in his breath and took his arms down, then slowly turned to face him. Manic unlocked the gate to let him out. Sonic came out and felt himself being turned around in front of his older and apparently more dominant brother, he refused to look at him though, especially since he was crying. Manic folded his arms "So. You learn anything?" he asked
"You had no right!" Sonic snapped, it didn't sound the least bit threatening though. Manic rolled his eyes "I think I did. I'm older than you" he told him
"Only by two hours!" Sonic defended, sniffling in his tears
"That doesn't change the fact that you were acting like a brat. Sonic, your bad attitude is gonna get you into a lot of trouble soon! That's why I tried to nip it in the bud, but its obviously not worked very well, so..." he reached out for Sonic again, only to have him step back, terrified
"No! No! It worked! I'll be good! Just, don't do it again!" he begged. Manic raised an eyebrow at the sudden remorseful attitude
"Not sure..."
"I will! Manic I promise!" Sonic assured, tears overflowing "I will! Please, I will, believe me" Manic just had to look in his eyes to know he was telling the truth
‘well…I know he’ll at least try!’
"Ok, I'll hold you to it, but if you break it, I'll be mad" he warned
"ok, ok, I understand, I won't let you down!" Sonic was getting more than a little distressed. Manic smiled slightly
"Alright. I believe you. C'mon, lets find Sonia"
"sorry" Sonic whispered "didn't mean to be a brat"
"Its ok" Manic nodded as he slipped his arm around his younger brother and started to lead him in the direction to his younger sister, only to get a hiss from him
"ow..."
"Hurts? Good, I got cold cream in the van. You run back, I'll tell Sonia where we'll be" he instructed. Sonic nodded and walked as best as he could to the van. Chuckling at Sonic's hisses, Manic went to find his sister.
Sonia raised a playful eyebrow at Manic's story "So, think he'll behave now?" she asked
"He should, otherwise..." Manic trailed off "Now if you'll excuse me, I gotta take care of something"
The end
I know this has some added dialogue but I needed it in there! Anyway, what do you think? Should I have rated it maybe?
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Comments: 101

Rayloopster [2017-01-30 23:59:02 +0000 UTC]

I dont wanna break the conclusion but you realised Manic is the middle child Sonia is the oldest and your right with sonic been the youngest

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redasscutegirl24 [2015-04-28 00:39:24 +0000 UTC]

nice

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sunstar989 [2015-01-19 10:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Good job on this story you should do another one

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ChrisSonic48 [2013-05-16 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]

good story

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EpicSonicTF2Fan1 [2011-11-06 23:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Alternate Ending: Duct Tape to the mouth.

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XmagicgirlX [2011-07-01 23:47:48 +0000 UTC]

awwww i kinda feel bad for sonic but he was being annoying. it is kinda wierd that manic spanked him because thier brothers. but it is a cool story.

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CaptainAvery [2007-04-07 06:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Kekeke. I don't think these are supposta be dirty but they are. ^^ Yay!

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Gothicruby In reply to CaptainAvery [2007-04-07 11:54:58 +0000 UTC]

XD Nah, it aint s'posed to be dirty xD Just like; dad gets mad at kid--kid gets it XD

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CaptainAvery In reply to Gothicruby [2007-04-09 18:46:14 +0000 UTC]

*starts laughing* Awww, I guess not. Manic kinda reminds me of my dad though. 0.o My ass hurts just thinking about it. X.X

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Gothicruby In reply to CaptainAvery [2007-04-09 20:43:25 +0000 UTC]

X_X Well I guess that was kinda the impression I was goin' for XD Ah well; if it worked, right? XD

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CaptainAvery In reply to Gothicruby [2007-04-10 05:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Sonic Underground is so much more fun to watch now. Arigato. ^^

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Gothicruby In reply to CaptainAvery [2007-04-10 11:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Heh, no problem!

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AlexE88 [2006-01-17 14:18:08 +0000 UTC]

:wince: Ouch.... Sonic's not going to be able to sit down any time soon, not for at least a... fortnight... youch...
Anyway, cool, I must agree Manic was a bit too harsh, but it DID work.

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Gothicruby In reply to AlexE88 [2006-01-17 15:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ I got two sequels to this up if your interested? ^^

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AlexE88 In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-17 18:27:31 +0000 UTC]

I saw them... but I won't be able to read them till weekend.

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Gothicruby In reply to AlexE88 [2006-01-17 19:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Ok then! ^^

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AlexE88 In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-17 20:08:54 +0000 UTC]

Heya... if you ever have any time to spare... you wouldn't mind having a peak at my fan fic too...
It kinda longer, and it's in chapters, I've already submitted 7, and I've 3 more to submit....

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Gothicruby In reply to AlexE88 [2006-01-17 21:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Sure! No problem! I'll get on that in a sec!

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AlexE88 In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-18 17:37:54 +0000 UTC]

thankies!

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SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 16:48:42 +0000 UTC]

that was a pretty long story. But I think it was great Nice job

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 17:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Really? Cool! Sorry to be fussy, but what did ya like about it? (I like in-depth stuff, sorry )

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 18:48:19 +0000 UTC]

well, actually, I really liked the first paragraph, the one where they go to the cell block. and then they start saying "Yeah yeah enough chit chat" basically just the first

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Ok! ^^ You don't think Manic was too tough on him?

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 18:52:23 +0000 UTC]

well, Manic was a little tough but thats what an older brother has to do sometimes XD

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 19:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Yep! And you don't think the age order is...wakced out, right? Sorry, I don't get many comments, I seek attention for this one Sorry!

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 20:23:01 +0000 UTC]

thats ok

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 20:45:52 +0000 UTC]

So? Anything else?...

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 20:47:14 +0000 UTC]

ok. since I read and commented your story, may you read and comment my story?
[link]

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 21:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Yeah ofcourse!! I'm so sorry!! I'm selfish! Would you read the sequels to this if I posted them up?

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 21:42:30 +0000 UTC]

sure

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 21:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!! Oh yeah, I read your story. Photographic memory ^^

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SuperDuperSonic In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-14 21:49:00 +0000 UTC]

<(^_^)>

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Gothicruby In reply to SuperDuperSonic [2006-01-14 23:35:30 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Ricku [2006-01-10 21:03:57 +0000 UTC]

That is so mean to Sonic! And it's not Sonic's fault, that he might be too overrecting... It's just his personality. And Manic was waaaay too mean. O____O

But otherwise, very good story! I wish I could write stories this well too...

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-10 21:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Yipe! Sorry! I know, I know, it was more than a little mean, but...Manic's got a short fuse right? I don't know, I had a fever at the time and this was buzzin' round my brain...sorry! But, before you hate me for it, help me spread the word about it? please?

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-10 22:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't apologize And i don't hate you. ^^
Thought the story was on Manic section pretty... Well... He was mean But otherwise, I liked it! It kinda seemed weird to Sonic to cry, but he never cries and that's annoying. I thank you, that you made Sonic cry.
And I'll help you to get people to read your story! Thought it's hard, 'cause I hardly know many who reads sonic fanfics... :/ Except myself.

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 07:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thanks for helping! Just a heads up; Sonic will probably cry in alot of my stories, well, these stories anyway. Just for emotion purposes really. Thanks! I was just thinking; how would this look on the actual cartoon? _O:

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-11 14:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Sonic crying inthe series...? I never wanna see THAT day coming... O_o'

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 15:29:25 +0000 UTC]

hmm? Um...I think I know what I wrote but I'm not sure...could ya tell me again so I can answer, please?
(Nevermind! I just realized! yeah, maybe it would be a little freaky to see Sonic cry in the series, but I don't really think so. Anyway, thanks again! ^__^

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-11 17:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, welcome! =^.^=

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 19:29:32 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 15:26:02 +0000 UTC]

hmm? Um...I think I know what I wrote but I'm not sure...could ya tell me again so I can answer, please?

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-11 17:25:31 +0000 UTC]

You see thet "Parent" think on your message thinky thing? Click that, and it will show the last message you wrote
Hope you understood that... XD I'm usually very bad at explaining things... - -'

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 19:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Ah! I understand it now! Thanks! Um...if ya get a similar sorta message, you'lll know where I went wrong! sorry! And thanks (Why'd they call it parent? I'm not lettin' my parents on my laptop!)

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-11 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]

Okay And you don't need to apologize
And why do they call it parent? I have no idea... O_o

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-11 21:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! So, your pic's almost done, I got the artwork for one of the sequels almost done, another gift I owe somebody's almost done...Ya know where this is going So. Would you read the sequels if I posted 'em up? There almost done!
(LOL)

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-11 22:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yeah, I know.
And I will read the sequels!!! But it MIGHT take time, 'cause I've been so tired and everything... - -' It's beacuse school sucks my energy out of me. I almost fell asleep on the lessons...
But submit them, and I'll read them, sooner or later!

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-12 07:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Yay! And take ya time, I know how school can be...ugh! I'm takin' SATS this year! Darn exams...grr! In short, I know how ya feel I'm actually writing this BEFORE I go to school!

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Ricku In reply to Gothicruby [2006-01-12 15:52:51 +0000 UTC]

I write these messages usually after the school. On the morning I'm so tired, that I might write something really weird... O_o
Next week we have two or three tests, yay... - -
And tomorrow is friday! 13. friday... O_o But I'm usually pretty lucky on that day... XD

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Gothicruby In reply to Ricku [2006-01-12 22:38:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm lucky on that day too! Only reason I get up early is to do my hair (Otherwise I look like Gohan ^^ That reminds me, gotta scan that pic!) and I get 1/2 an hour before school, so I'm bored ^^ I have tests next week too...Science and Maths...joy ¬¬;
I know how ya feel, Thanks again!

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