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Published: 2009-05-26 02:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1820; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 15
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Hey folks! I've been super busy lately, its been warm and the folks wanted me to help with yardwork, alongside I picked up more hours at the gym. Busy busy busy busy.Here's comic page progress. Should be done real soon.
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Took the advice and changed Syrian's stance - I never seem to make him dynamic enough on the first shot. Adjusted lines, added basecolor, i think Amy's one arm looks kinda wonky but I'm super tired and I'll fix it later.
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He's a telepath with massive power over Gravity. He's doing that mentally.
Each sibling has a unique power. All of his are raw force/telekinetic/gravitational.
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Hmm, do you have a website that you put your comics on? They seem interesting.
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im just starting to post them, and for now it will just be on here lol. All of 'em are in my gallery, I just need to figure out how to make folders to separate my work.
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Ahh, well I'll keep an eye on it then.
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Ooh, some sister/sister action. Nice.
Also, don't listen to Brad. He doesn't know anything about drawing.
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EGAD YOURE BACK FROM THE GRAVE
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Looks good so far, the only thing I can say is to play with Syrian's stance.
Try making it a bit more dynamic, maybe try having his body twist a bit to reveal his left arm reaching out more, and his right bent a bit with the fist pointing more towards the viewer adding some foreshadowing. Also with the legs maybe try having the left bent a lil' and the right kinda back and straightened, and making his torso lean more towards his sisters.
Other than the Syrian's stance, everything else looks pretty spot on, keep it up!
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haha, thanks! I'll try that out, for some reason making more dynamic sketches with him kinda evades me.
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Actually now that I stare at this I'm plotting the demise of Syrian's boobs. Try tweaking that a bit, maybe the far arm too. One might be affecting the other -- I think it's an angle issue.
Have you tried posing like that in a mirror?
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So far, so good.
I just imagined them saying things, or them being colored in some way.
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