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Published: 2018-06-18 02:40:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 14297; Favourites: 361; Downloads: 94
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Morgan was always the know-it-all in her class, making her the prime target for school bullies to push her into doing their homework. Robin eventually had enough of this and sought to handle things herself. Unfortunately for her, these kids were smarter than they look as they managed to trap and tie up mother and daughter together, and then proceeded to humiliate them by tickling their helpless, delicate, and dainty soles. Poor Morgan was just as ticklish as her sensitive mother, but mommy dearest had bigger problems: The curiosity of teen male hormones.A commission done by involving Female Morgan and the Female Robin from Fire Emblem (specifically their FE Heroes designs) having a bit of ticklish peril while handling some kids at a school, with one of them deciding to have his way with Robin a little.
A little more etchy than I usually submit (hence the age block), but I think it works out so long as it's just mom on the receiving end of the more devious ideas.
(I pray to God this doesn't get taken down and am issued a strike. I've seen much worse get outright ignored.)
Morgan, Robin, Fire Emblem (C) Nintendo, Intelligent Systems
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The ladies from Fire Emblem Awakening have been in need of love for a while now. 
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....so just take it? lol
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And letting her Mom get touched like that, too? I don't think that's just something you take sitting down. lol
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I love these kinds of scenarios. Such a wonderful play with power dynamics too, since the mother is supposed to be at the top of the food chain in these settings. There's something real fun about watching as she's demoted to bully victim alongside her daughter, by the very person she'd expected to trample on.
I recall seeing another drawing like this awhile back, featuring a mother tickled alongside her daughter by the very bullies she was there to stop.Β
I was so inspired by it I ended up writing a whole story from it back then. Great to see the subject revisited.
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That was me too back then, actually. lol
Though there, the characters had no actual relation outside of last name. Here, it's actually mother/daughter for real. (Sort of.)
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I don't think it was, actually. It was a Tadashibaka drawing called "Tales of After-School Problems" that got my writing hands moving back then.Β
Still, I should take another look though your gallery. I'm always up for finding more of those.Β
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That was a commission he did for me. That's what I was getting at. XD
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Ah, I see. Yep, he did mention you in the description.Β
Well, cheers to fellow appreciators of mothers in distress.Β
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Been trying to think of how to do my own story of this scenario, but I've been having a hellish time figuring out how to have it make sense with the cast I have in mind.
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That's often my cue to jump in with ideas, but unfortunately, I know very little about Fire Emblem.Β
What makes the current cast a problem?Β
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Well, the most obvious one is that both Robin and Morgan are EXTREMELY smart (smarter than I make them out to be here) and have full access to spells. I'd need a reason for them not to have their spellbooks on-hand and a reason for how Robin would fall prey to this in the first place.
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I see. I stopped by TV tropes and noticed that Robin is the player avatar, which would probably make her a good tactician in a game like Fire Emblem.Β
The big thing to remember is that no one's perfect, and smart people often have a weakness of some sort. Does either of them have any sort of vulnerability? Something that would make them act more rashly than usual? If they can be caught in a moment of weakness and rendered unconscious, their books can be separated from them.Β
Another possibility would be to have their captivity all be part of an elaborate plan of Robin's. Of course, you wouldn't reveal that until the end, otherwise, all tension would go out the window. If you wrote this from Morgan's perspective and had Robin keep Morgan in the dark about her plan, then you'd still be free to frame the scenario like it's a disaster rather than a plan working as intended.
Robin could be putting them in this compromising situation just so she could have some officials eventually come in and catch the bullies red-handed. As a bit of foreshadowing, you could have Morgan wonder what made Robin act so unusually incompetent when they went to deal with the bullies.Β
Anyway, it looks like I'm getting carried away again. I should leave you with some room to put your own spin on the story. Do either of these ideas sound like they could work for your story?Β
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Oh no, I'm perfectly okay with you getting carried away if it's something you're passionate about. Certainly helps me out with the thinking process! I've been wanting to get back into writing for a while now anyway.
The first idea sounds more logical since Fire Emblem doesn't really have a police force of any kind. XD
I was thinking of doing a bad end to go along with the actual good end of the story, sort of like a what-if, but that direction might be a bit much for this site now that I think about it....
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Yo.
Pardon the delay. It's been a busy evening.
Anyway, by officials, I was actually thinking faculty, or school security. This story does take place in a school right? Of course with this being the Fire Emblem universe, it's probably very different from the high school I grew up in.
Still, if you decide to go with idea 1 instead, I imagine something underhanded will have to be pulled since these characters are too powerful for bullies to just walk up and abduct them. I had a similar situation in my story. An adult female ex-cop against a bunch of high school girls meant they couldn't just kidnap her. I had one of them suspiciously wander into a storage shed and then drop a vial of knockout gas when the mother confronted her.
So, I'm guessing you'll need some means of subtly inducing paralysis, or rendering your ladies unconscious. Drugs in food, gas, a spell, or maybe some form of antimagic, since magic is what makes them so formidable.
You could also take advantage of the fact that Robin is not intimidated by them. Have the bullies send in an ineffectual decoy bully to lull Robin into being overconfident. If Robin is not the sort to dive head-first into a conflict without a plan, this could be the trick needed to convince her that these bullies aren't actually threatening enough to require a sound strategy.Β
As for the good end/bad end idea, it's all up to what happens in the bad end. I don't know how dark you're planning to go with this, but I've found that a light-hearted tone can take a dark plot and make it less off-putting for the squeamish. You could do this by making Robin come across as less nervous while in captivity, or by making the bullies seem less like masterminds and more like struggling mastermind wannabees. Another thing that I think would help a lot would be to avoid ending the story with them still in distress. Maybe have them wake up untied, sweaty, and exhausted, with their hair a complete mess, collectively thinking, "Well, THAT didn't work as planned."
Good luck, and feel free to reach out if you've got any questions, or just want me to look at and comment on a draft you've written. I've done critiques for a handful of other writers on this site, so I'll be happy to help.
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Well when I say bad, I don't mean bad in a plot sense, but more like how it is in this pic here with one of those bullies being a little too touchy-feely with Robin.
Not sure if that would be a bit much or not.
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Ah, I wish I knew the answer there. I was going to say "Go for it" since I did something similar without catching flak for it, but I also had an all-female cast, and the tickling was treated more like a means to an end, where the bullies were trying to "persuade" the heroine not to show up to school during a school play audition.
Still, there are some pretty raunchy stories on this site, which I welcome. I suppose if you were to put a warning at the beginning, that could deflect the wrath of some squeamish viewers.
Let me get back to you on that. I have a friend on this site who would probably have a better idea of what would and wouldn't fly.Β
Also, just in case he asks, what are you thinking of having the boys do to Robin? Is it just going to be tickle-domination, or will they be touching more forbidden areas on Robin as well?
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I wanna say a mix of both (mostly tickling), but only if it's just Robin who gets the more mature kind of attention. I'm bold, yes, but I'm not stupid.
I also kinda want it to be light-hearted story-wise, but not to the point where it feels like a Saturday morning cartoon. The idea of a "Well, THAT happened" ending would fit what I was thinking of doing anyway.
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I just heard back from my friend about your story. This was his reply:
"Is he planning on doing a rape scene? Or just some forced foot worship? If it's the latter, I've done worse in 'The Inker' among other series. Even if it's the former, it should probably be fine if there's a strict sexual content warningΒ "
So, it sounds like you'll be all right as long as you put up a sexual content warning.Β
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Whoooooooa, yeah no. The "r" word would DEFINITELY be crossing the line for me. Geez. I have a little more dignity than that.
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Sounds good. I haven't heard back from my friend yet, but it sounds like you don't have much to worry about.Β
Also, one thing to keep in mind is that side-by-side tickling scenes like these often work best when the two lees end up influencing each other in some way. Things like mutual encouragement, or discouragement when one sees what the other is going through, sympathy, or embarrassment as they lose control of themselves in front of the other, things like that.Β
What I really love about making one lee the mother of the other is that this immediately saddles her with pressure to act like the guardian or the protector of her child, which will be challenged as she finds her own will being tested, and starts to worry about her own well-being.Β
Anyway, I look forward to seeing what comes from this. Good luck.Β
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Yessss, so good to see Morgan's feet at last!
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Very cute. I was wondering when you would be getting to thjs game lol. I love this new mother-daughter pair you made
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hey if you want a coloured version of this, mind if I give it a shot?
I'd love to colour it if you don't mind?
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I was gonna do it myself, but sure, go for it.
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you got refs for them? colour wise.Β
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Robin: d1u5p3l4wpay3k.cloudfront.net/β¦
Morgan:
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ok thanks.
i'll do it sometime during the week.Β
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Don't rush it now. XD
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Aww, it's great they share the same huge feet. It may be perspective, but I like it big.
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It's the perspective, dude. XD
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Still great to see 'em so big.
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So who's being tickled? Morgan and Mom, or Robin and Mom?
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I thought it was pretty clear that Robin's the mom here.
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Oh, is she? My mistake.
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Love the drawing and mini story :3Β
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Let me just get into a nerd rant about how this isn't possib- *PUNCHED*
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We'll just say the bully kids are a full lvl 40 team. Lol
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Well, not just that cuz honestly my Robin would school them, she's a fucking badass with a Thoron tome but more cuz Morgan is male if Robin is female.
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I just remembered that soon as I sent the reply. Lol
But you know what, screw it. Mom and daughter is much cuter.
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True. If I wanted it to be realistic I'd replace Morgan with Lucina, but given the alt universes in FE, I'm sure at least one of them had Robin marry someone and have a daughter named Morgan.
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