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I walk hand in handwith this blond hair
and these violet eyes
hoping to reach
my destination
in some timely fashion
though without meaning
is the linear existence
in which I live
for when we walk
it all melts
into a singular plane
I ask of her, questions
she answers in smiles
which puzzles me greatly
yet provides great comfort
in this sea of thoughts
and sea of dreams
that plague me
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Comments: 2
udermir [2002-05-13 06:48:00 +0000 UTC]
Its me again......Ive been there too. This Is very cool, the way you fixated on the thoughs of this friend of yours, very intreging the way that the words flow into each other and pushes the consept foward to the last word, puts the reader in your shoes wile you walk. it almost feels like this person has a connection to you in some higher level than the eyes can see. masterful..... by the way thanks for the comment.
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