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Published: 2012-10-21 18:52:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 4506; Favourites: 266; Downloads: 48
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24 hour comic day is a sadistic challenge, in which you have to script, plan and create a complete 24 page long comic in 24 consecutive hours. This was my first time entering, and I made... This strange little story. Considering it's nearly Halloween, I figured I'd make a Valentine's themed story! As ya do. I don't think this story is one of my best exactly, hence why I thought it fitting for this. If it turns out crap, only one day lost xDChrist this was an ordeal, but a great experience. I actually finished five hours early xD; And I should have spent the rest of the time making it look pretty, buuuut I'll be honest, my hand was knackered and so was I. I spent them five hours sleeping.
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Comments: 65
reaper600 [2013-09-11 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely fantastic. I love it so much. The tone change at the end was very comical lol. Wonderful job. Would love to try this challenger at some point.
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glowworm56 [2013-01-20 04:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Painting the roses red--with his blood--all for a girl who just isn't worth it. Sadistically hilarious and ironic.
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bobshmit13 [2012-11-27 08:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Well, at least she loved them, although either she's blind or just didn't care that her boyfriend was DYING IN A BLOOD OF HIS OWN BLOOD!!!!! Jesus, why didn't he just try painting them?
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Leimyu [2012-11-15 21:59:00 +0000 UTC]
Jeeezus .. that WTF'd me so hard, I probably won't be catching the sleep tonight I thought I was XD Respect. That said, damn it. Daamn that woman.
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KaeruLapin [2012-10-24 00:00:20 +0000 UTC]
God, this was fantastic! I really loved the story, specially the ending. Congrats for making this in 20hrs. it's a challenge not everyone would pick.
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applePAI [2012-10-23 19:39:08 +0000 UTC]
What a fantastic twist this ended with xD Having expected something usual and heartwarming, which turned to something rather horrific, and ending in humor... that was very enjoyable. Loved the bartender's eyes, too. Even a detail as simple as that added an interesting depth to his character.
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LockmanCapulet [2012-10-22 20:46:45 +0000 UTC]
So I thought the end would be al romantic or all tragic, but it wound up being both with a little "wut"-ness in there.
wut.
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SysMon-Anon [2012-10-22 19:37:02 +0000 UTC]
What a bitchy woman.
Anyway, this is actually really sad. Did he die in the end, bleeding himself dry to make her the most beautiful gift ever? D:
And what was that weird guy with the inverted coloured eyes?
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bobshmit13 In reply to SysMon-Anon [2012-11-27 08:28:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm thinking he's the devil since the poor guy ended up nearly (or entirely) bleeding to death.
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H0lyhandgrenade In reply to SysMon-Anon [2012-10-22 19:48:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm suprised that no one else at all commented on the inverted eyes xD I'm glad someone noticed!
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Priscillachan [2012-10-22 14:56:15 +0000 UTC]
For some reason I thought he'd end up dating the gay bartender... o_o
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annaoi [2012-10-22 13:58:47 +0000 UTC]
That ending was unexpected... but you hit the sadistic-type right on the spot! Nice job!
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JuMiKu [2012-10-22 07:11:21 +0000 UTC]
I REALLY hate this girl; hated her through every panel of this comic. I really hoped the gay guy would make something bad happen to her. Gah, I'm gonna imagine she was hit by a bus on her way home. Oh god, I'm begging you to make a comic of her gruesome death.
Seriously, "The meaning of Valentine's day?!" Fine! I donate lots of money to the chocolate and flower industry, b****. AND she apparently didn't get HIM anything at all!
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KandiSOUL [2012-10-22 04:40:57 +0000 UTC]
holy jemima, theres a song called "black roses red" it would be perfect for this
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johnnywhoa [2012-10-22 03:27:24 +0000 UTC]
Oh, the things we do for love~
You'd think she would have been more concerned about the mass of bleeding than the flowers xD
But a big congratulations on finishing 24 hour comic day! I've tried it before (and failed), I know what a crazy ordeal it can be. But your results speak for themselves. I LOVE the result! Great job
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Rumakashi [2012-10-22 02:13:11 +0000 UTC]
By the title of "24 hour comic" I thought you were just going to doodle what you do on an average day as I seen those around before. Sound like you took the harder "24 hour comic" challenge.
What up with you and horrible endings? (Horrible as in evil, not bad of course.)
It is a lovely story with a great (though horrible) ending. Isn't black roses like the worst kind of roses to give to someone? Bartender must had misheard or just made a huge mistake.
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FlightoftheMoon [2012-10-22 02:08:05 +0000 UTC]
I... did NOT expect that reaction to the roses.
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wr4ith0 [2012-10-22 02:05:19 +0000 UTC]
I can't decide if the roses are insanely magical or she's just not a very nice person. ...second read thru seems to indicate that he did this to himself on purpose, so I'm guessing the latter. From his agonized moaning at the end he seems to still be alive... happy endingβ½
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TheWhiteJewel [2012-10-22 01:55:53 +0000 UTC]
Well if this didn't give you warm fuzzies then nothing ever will.
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Pencil-Artisan [2012-10-22 01:07:33 +0000 UTC]
... oooooh. I like this concept... I really like it... *touch*
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xKeren [2012-10-22 00:49:50 +0000 UTC]
-facepalm.
DUDE. LEAVE THE CHICK.
Lovely story though. What a great guy :'D
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EternoAprendiz [2012-10-21 23:41:17 +0000 UTC]
He really should have switch teams... -_-
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ChocoHolicxxx [2012-10-21 22:47:49 +0000 UTC]
What a nice girlfriend to walk away, holding the roses, leaving her boyfriend, who she hasn't seen in a year, in a pool of blood 8D
this is such a nice story asdlfkdjdh
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Cheery-Cherry [2012-10-21 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]
OMG I LOVE THIS ITS SOOOO CUTEH! <3 i just said out loud 'awwwwww' and my family members turned to me and where like o.0
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fifthdimensional [2012-10-21 22:22:51 +0000 UTC]
SO BEAUTIFUL. This is the most accurate depiction of Valentine's Day I have ever seen.
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JayMission [2012-10-21 21:56:10 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap the mood whiplash. o_o
I think I
need to sit down
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Quicksolver [2012-10-21 21:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Exactly how I felt, particularly at the beginning.
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KennyNoms [2012-10-21 20:56:40 +0000 UTC]
Ah, um. Wow. So... They'll be having dinner together later? XD Unexpected ending was unexpected.
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Tsuenica [2012-10-21 20:17:29 +0000 UTC]
SHE THE B****!!!! SHE DON'T CARE IF HER BOYFRIEND ALMOST DIE!!!!! IF I WAS CLAUDE GIRLFRIEND,I WILL BE THANKFUL TO GIVE ME A SMALL GIFT!!!! I HATE A GIRL WHO LIKE BIG GIFT AND DON'T BE GREATFUL WHAT GIFT THEIR BOYFRIEND GAVE TO THEM AND WORK SOOO HARD TO GET THEM!!!!!
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MissTooni [2012-10-21 20:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it looks great! *u* And very coherent and well-planned for being done in 24 hours. I love how tragic that ending is...
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wingedswordyunagi [2012-10-21 20:12:44 +0000 UTC]
D: whoa.....she just...left....HE'S BLEEDING TO DEATH! D:<
Great comic though! XD Love your work!
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SpongeMuffin [2012-10-21 20:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Well. That was not the ending I was expecting. Oh goodness.
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Cookieravage [2012-10-21 20:07:22 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome , I would have never expected that ending.
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RazorD9 [2012-10-21 20:00:23 +0000 UTC]
He put his sweat and blood into those roses. And maybe some tears too.
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jonadiah [2012-10-21 19:33:15 +0000 UTC]
I was expecting the end to be that she breaks up with him for not seeing her.
... I see you went with a slightly bloodier approach.
Epic comic, by the way.
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Red-Rose-12 [2012-10-21 19:31:58 +0000 UTC]
awesome story but i think that girl is a bitch.
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luvpunkie [2012-10-21 19:21:35 +0000 UTC]
That was rather brilliant. Such a great ending!
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