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Published: 2008-05-13 16:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 450; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Abyssal Inferno

decrepit masks to
cover the desolate faces
each face equal to
their inner destruction

I have no mask
as I wake from a dreary sleep
glancing at the sullen
faces around me

The plane I woke upon
holds yet another permanent sleep
blinking for only a second
another crashes into the side

faces change
showing terror upon their eyes
as people launch into
a darkened abyss

no screams, no change
people evaporating
I cannot change
frozen in the darkness of death

grabbing a mask of pure O2
I inhale too deeply
smiling as we plummet
towards the brightened hell

no explosion, only fire
fierce as a dozen blazing furies
I walk from the hellish inferno
laughing hysterically
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Comments: 9

mdareberaid [2008-05-14 07:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Kate was right when she said sleeping too much is just as bad as sleeping too little

Might you laugh hysterically due to the flood of oxygen?

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mdareberaid In reply to mdareberaid [2008-05-15 18:49:20 +0000 UTC]

We've already established that.

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hackerkind In reply to mdareberaid [2008-05-15 16:21:53 +0000 UTC]

maybe...... or cause im crazy.

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mdareberaid In reply to hackerkind [2008-05-15 18:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I thought we'd already established that.

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Raye9683 [2008-05-13 20:29:30 +0000 UTC]

have no mask? that's a laugh in itself... not as well written as your last ones.

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hackerkind In reply to Raye9683 [2008-05-14 05:30:54 +0000 UTC]

hey if i give book to steve, can he give it to you. (bald-headed steve) i heard he was with you guys.

Also, how is not having mask giggly. explain....in detail.

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Raye9683 In reply to hackerkind [2008-05-15 03:21:37 +0000 UTC]

i haven't seen steve in a while... he has my # unlike some one else. I would explain cept you'd take it wrong... as usual. or call me emo or something else stupid. when you don't even know me. You never really gave me that chance. bye.

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star382000 In reply to Raye9683 [2008-05-13 23:57:22 +0000 UTC]

I could be reading into it too much, but from the first part, it seems that not having a mask could mean not hiding the destruction or what the person is capable of, being outwardly/clearly desolate or something. And I think there could also be importance with the different planes, but this is all just supposition.

Interesting piece, I think the ending is really intriguing.

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hackerkind In reply to star382000 [2008-05-14 05:33:19 +0000 UTC]

tim don't know. wake from dream.....write poem.

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