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Amatoriam [2013-03-14 04:08:25 +0000 UTC]

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Wow, you have a lot of potential. Colors, shading, pose, are all excellent. By going through your gallery, I can tell your art is improving by each submission. Just a few tips, however, anatomy wise, things seem a little off. One arm is longer than the other, and are very pointy. I just tried to copy this pose by standing up, and it was quite difficult. The clothes seem a little too "painted on", there are no folds.I love how you added the perspective to the face, it came out excellent. I really can't wait for further works. You should really get a new program, however, paint is slowing you down. I recommend Paint Tool Sai. It's simple, and looks nice. Plus, it has layers. Overall, your art needs more movement and emotion. One last thing, there should be colored lights reflecting off the body to show the brightness of the glowsticks. Keep up the good work.

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ThirteenNotes [2013-03-14 03:02:03 +0000 UTC]

I LURVE IT ERMAIGLOB IT'S BEAUTIFUL

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