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Published: 2004-09-18 18:30:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 130; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Save me from the massacre called my life
Show me what it is for you to give me the knife
Show me how to do it and show me where to insert it
Slowly leave me hanging
And watch me as I dangle
Turn the hook and watch me get strangled
In every second you know my last breathe is about to come
And I'm watching you as you run
You were always the misleading kind
Now I know why you watch me as I'm bleeding
I'm the only one you were never needing
I guess this pain in my throat is what you've been dreaming
So now I can feel the tears start to well
And I'm hiding inside myself, I'm pushing you away
I guess I never needed you except for today
Why are you always the only thing that isn't in my way?
Now I'm feeling the pain well up inside
Is it suppose to hurt like this... even when I cry?
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Comments: 6

Darkwolf004 [2004-09-19 04:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Symbolical or not I'm freaking out

This poem is so good that I can feel it... I'm shaking

That remember me of bad experience with a knife and I don't like that

It's intense... I know it's what people always say but I can relate to that

I swear It's true and that's why I favorite it right this way

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headstart- In reply to Darkwolf004 [2004-09-19 14:18:08 +0000 UTC]

OH thank you!! I'm glad you like it!

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Bleeding-Moon3 [2004-09-18 20:45:29 +0000 UTC]

that's an amazing poem!

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headstart- In reply to Bleeding-Moon3 [2004-09-19 00:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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LastTearDropFalling [2004-09-18 18:31:09 +0000 UTC]

wow...that last line...jsut.....wow....
aubri that was amazing...wow...

....wow....

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headstart- In reply to LastTearDropFalling [2004-09-18 18:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh olivia I love you! haha the wow's are my favorite!!!
Thank you very much on the comment... it always means a lot!

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