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Published: 2004-09-01 15:12:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Apparently you don't get itMy heart was all in it
I was working for the fight
I was up against the mess
Now you leave me here
In the middle of tangled strings
Broken hearts
And damaged wings
You are so little of the few
You are cupid's arrow
And know exactly what to do
You never skipped a beat
You always brought me to my knees
Why were you so cold?
I'm unable to think right now,
Unable to make sense of it all,
Damn it, just back off
I'm okay
I'll be fine
God, why did tangled strings have to intertwine
I'm thinking, isn't that enough?
Can this not be enough?
I've been through hell and back
What the fuck, how can I be so relaxed
I'm damned, it's useless
My hearts overflowing for this
She's got me hooked,
But I'm unable to see what took away from him
So lonely, so fucking confused
Two people, one me
What am I to do,
I'll waste away
Or I'll walk away
Either way, I can't stay
I'm not as happy as I'd like to be
But god damn it, why did this have to happen to me?
I'm under the impression,
That this is going to be a lesson
Of a tangled string conicidence
And so it goes on,
They fought for the fight,
The undeclared matters of the heart,
Everyone,
So torn apart
So we'll watch as this falls all messed,
Only one way out, No other way in,
Just another happy ending gone wrong,
Another tangled string conicidence....
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Comments: 2
LastTearDropFalling [2004-09-01 17:12:36 +0000 UTC]
whoaaaa i'm going crazy...i thought you were just on AIM so i was gonna say something about this poem...
anyways..this is an amazing poem!!!! i love it a lot
you have a way to put so much emotion into what you write...great job!
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headstart- In reply to LastTearDropFalling [2004-09-01 18:17:46 +0000 UTC]
thank you for that comment olivia. I dont know, this is just so confusing... and I think it was better to get it out in writing than saying it to someone and its probably how exactly each of them feel. It also is such a genuine comment and very special, because the poem you wrote about it was spectacular.
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