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heartsofchains β€” War it's not worth it
Published: 2005-06-28 15:39:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description War is the color of blood.
It sounds like the world in peril,
and it taste like dirty soot.
War smells like a graveyard,
and it looks like humans suffering.
War feels like being killed.
IT'S NOT WORTH IT.
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Comments: 8

Sunchild-sama [2006-06-02 15:46:40 +0000 UTC]

It’s short, but very moving.
Associating the smaller pieces of war with the unfortunate things of humanity. Interesting.

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Sunchild-sama In reply to Sunchild-sama [2006-06-04 04:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Looking foward to the day.

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heartsofchains In reply to Sunchild-sama [2006-06-03 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]

It was one of my class projects. I will rewrite it longer and see what happens

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hotaru-yami [2005-07-09 13:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Short, sweet and very Poignant!
I agree it isn't worth it!

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Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 14:45:22 +0000 UTC]

ok,now I have a suggestion for you...maybe try making your poems a little longer ^^ They sometimes have more meaning that way

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heartsofchains In reply to Aquira-chan [2005-07-01 16:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I'll be sure to make them longer. Thanks for the comments and adding me to your friends list.

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Aquira-chan In reply to heartsofchains [2005-07-01 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^-^

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SufferingAngel [2005-06-28 20:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you all the way!! :salut:

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