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Published: 2012-09-25 07:08:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 316; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Description Joshua Imala:[link]

Marco Renario:[link]

Serrin Fabray:[link]

Fletcher:[link]

Anya:[link]




This prison have a unique tracking system; Digletts
are used to track runaways. They're very fast underground and can sense movements from up above. This one predicted where the group were heading.


The K.I.A has a few tricks up its sleeves. Looks like Anya may have trouble getting out of this one. They don't take traitors lightly...

On a side note, The Agency (K.I.A) job is to sabotage any threat or weapon from enemy countries. They're a more efficient way of eliminating national threats and avoiding declarations of war. But they have instead taken what could have been destroyed ( the first model of the johtoan pokeball) and gave it to rich and powerful corporations itching to make profits after their arms production fell on a rapid decline.

Mr. Piper reminds Fletcher the real reason behind the creation of his weapons.
An old memory from thirty years ago resurfaces, but it's not fully complete ( it's fragmented and faces are missing) COUNTING THE DAYS TO MASS DESTRUCTION!
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Comments: 4

Safaeyu [2012-10-01 02:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Tsleel why you so cute?!

I've had this in my messages forever AND I WILL COMMENT ON YOUR ROUND THIS TIME LIKE THE GOOD FRIEND I AM TRYING TO BE ADLFDKAGDFKJA
I do like how you're also focusing on the more political aspect of the war. Not very many people do that. It almost has sort of a secret agent/batman feel to it what with all the secret weapons and the such. And how you implement each pokemon for military use is fantastic! Aaaahhh so much creativity in these rounds.

And oh what a cliffhanger you evil person you! What happened to Anya? Who are these people?! aksdf;ldgfk SUSPENSE
And Fletcheeerrrr. The guilt monsters got him too! Hopefully his new purpose shall give him the strength to carry forth~ That... or the fact that Anya is in trouble...

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hebi89 In reply to Safaeyu [2012-10-01 03:13:24 +0000 UTC]

JDFKSJFDSJSFLSFJLDSJ Thank you Saf
I'm not entirely proud of this round because of the political plot device--it left very little room for building on what's driving Fletcher to act they way he does. I thought the comments underneath should explain enough 8C

Anya's been captured by her own people ( an Intelligence agency--they know she doubled-crossed them)and since Fletcher does not know about this, he's going to assume Johto's forces had taken her captive. Things are going to go downhill for him there--and literally. I hope you know Mr.Piper is (no app needed) but research "Pied Piper"throughly and you'll get an idea. As an added bonus, look at what type of weapon Fletcher was building. Then pay very close attention to the candle scene on the first page. Put in old suppressed memories and hallucinations (which all involved sonic blasts) and you have a receipe for a monster in the making.I know it's rushed but I'm going to try to post an epilogue.

Yes, Tsleel is such a cutie <3 But she won't be that way forever...

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hebi89 In reply to hebi89 [2012-10-01 03:31:09 +0000 UTC]

The Name Pied Piper -focus on the symbolism behind it "Piper was a symbolic figure of Death."

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Torinados [2012-09-27 14:16:34 +0000 UTC]

Just... dsingdfkng Hebi. HEBI OH MY GOODNESS HEBI. This was FAN. TAS. TIC. My jaw dropped everywhere. I can't believe how much you've improved in every aspect, from story telling, art, style, coloring - it's been such a privilege watching you improve c:

The twist you added to Fletcher's plot is evil, though. Brilliant. But evil. 8I *waits for R5*

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