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We could never fashion flight from our broken boned epiphanies(Or raise our shattered glasses to the red on her lips)
But anaemic as horses we parade them through these streets
Revolution is nothing but progress here
Perched on razorwire fences
Birds give names to ghosts and raise them as their own
Truth is a figment of your imagination
And the telephone is the wire around your neck
Hung up with wishes across the grand suburbia
Our zeitgeist is a harlot
She teaches us that duty justifies submission. It doesn't
There is salt in the street but the banks are empty
From weeping like the chorus torn from our lungs
We never quite grasped the idea of morality
When ethics were fed through hospital tubes
And sometimes they throw bricks through our open windows
Just to pick the shards of glass from our children's eyes
Bones are the most hollow of structures
And cortexial limbs can't swim these waters
Or write salvation on crumbling walls
Down at the harbour the air tastes of coma
And orphans populate the barricades like tombstones
Try to distinguish the sand from the dust
And perhaps the grass will grow once more
And fill the hollows behind these statue's eyes
I once saw the word Empire in a children's book
I once saw a dead man give an apple to a passing child
There's a secret in this town
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Comments: 71
Hexospectrum In reply to ??? [2012-08-14 01:55:48 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you were able to see the future through this? What a massive compliment.
Hats off to you too in a gracious gesture of thanks
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hyperfluxy [2012-04-28 00:37:36 +0000 UTC]
It's so consistent throughout. Beautiful, beautiful work.
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Hexospectrum In reply to hyperfluxy [2012-04-29 21:54:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very, very much
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Hexospectrum In reply to ssssdiver [2012-04-27 10:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it
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ssssdiver In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-27 13:49:23 +0000 UTC]
hard work i'm glad two
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RexHolyblade [2012-04-24 06:29:42 +0000 UTC]
very well described and very artistically done. It was a joy to read from beginning to end especially for me lol since everything you wrote really reminds me of something similar to how I think lol
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Hexospectrum In reply to RexHolyblade [2012-04-24 11:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, glad you could connect with it
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RexHolyblade In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-24 18:02:40 +0000 UTC]
sure thing man. It was great!
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-04-24 11:58:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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Vyrerus [2012-04-24 04:03:45 +0000 UTC]
It was really good, but the ending was kind of a let down.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Vyrerus [2012-04-24 12:01:32 +0000 UTC]
I suppose that's kind of open to interpretation so of course I won't be able to satisy everyone. Sorry you felt let down by the ending but thank you for reading
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pictures-in-my-head [2012-04-24 02:52:29 +0000 UTC]
How can one piece POSSIBLY be this amazing? Well done.
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Hexospectrum In reply to pictures-in-my-head [2012-04-24 12:04:09 +0000 UTC]
Haha thank you very much I'm really glad you liked it
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pictures-in-my-head In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-25 18:00:19 +0000 UTC]
I really, really did
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Abracadabrante [2012-04-24 00:06:01 +0000 UTC]
I had to read it aloud. That only happens with the most beautiful of poems. Absolutely stunning.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Abracadabrante [2012-04-24 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, that is a wonderful compliment.
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Doodle-Fish [2012-04-23 22:45:34 +0000 UTC]
Very haunting...I had to read it twice to get the full gist of it.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Doodle-Fish [2012-04-23 23:22:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, I'm glad you took the time to re-read it
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Doodle-Fish In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-23 23:50:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. ^-^
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Hexospectrum In reply to colorship [2012-04-23 22:22:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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UnknownToDeathNorLif [2012-04-23 21:30:55 +0000 UTC]
Truly amazing work! I really love this...
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Hexospectrum In reply to UnknownToDeathNorLif [2012-04-23 22:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much I'm really glad you think so!
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UnknownToDeathNorLif In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-23 22:27:56 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
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TheSurvivorOfHathsin [2012-04-23 20:05:18 +0000 UTC]
This is hauntingly beautiful, hauntingly disturbing, yet at the same time hauntingly peaceful. I forget that beneath our simpleton exterior, you have the heart and mindset of a true artist. With your inspiration being anything you desire. I honestly think you could change the world for the better. Your work leaves a strong impact and lingers in the mind along with its hidden messages. But anyway, another moving and thought provoking piece of work. You maintain your status as my favourite deviant.
Oh, and congratuwelldone on making daily deviation. You truly earned it Hopefully it will be the first of many.
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Hexospectrum In reply to TheSurvivorOfHathsin [2012-04-23 22:21:52 +0000 UTC]
Just like a good Swedish film then . Nice to know that I appear as a simpleton, no but in all honesty thank you very much that is an overwhelmingly lovely compliment
. But I think, if this hypothetical world changing situation was to occur, you would not be totally exempt from the blame since I happen to know your creative abilities are quite astounding :').
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LookingGlassInk [2012-04-23 14:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Dark beautiful and aboslutely brilliant. Outstanding work and absolutely deserving of the DD. Thank you so much for sharing with us!
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Hexospectrum In reply to LookingGlassInk [2012-04-23 22:12:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! It means a lot that you'd say that ^^
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LookingGlassInk In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-23 22:23:25 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to hear that. Thank you again for such excellent work!
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Hexospectrum In reply to LookingGlassInk [2012-04-23 22:27:56 +0000 UTC]
No need to thank me, but you're very welcome
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finder647 [2012-04-23 12:51:05 +0000 UTC]
awesome. a very entertaining writings, i guess
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Hexospectrum In reply to finder647 [2012-04-23 22:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much I'm glad you thought so
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MariettaPalacios [2012-04-23 12:10:34 +0000 UTC]
nice and beautiful made my rusting mind to see and discover new words sorry my vocabulary cant cope up with you but i like it
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Hexospectrum In reply to MariettaPalacios [2012-04-23 22:11:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much I'm really glad you liked it
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Hexospectrum In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-04-23 11:09:20 +0000 UTC]
*inadequately grateful reply*
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UnspecifiedUnknown In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-23 11:10:16 +0000 UTC]
"constituent analogies" was inspired by this piece, btw.
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Hexospectrum In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-04-23 11:39:46 +0000 UTC]
I must confess I haven't read that yet (I'm so slow with checking deviantwatch notifications D. But I'm honoured you'd take such direct inspiration from me into one of your pieces
. I don't really have much time now until I have to leave but I'll definately read it later ^^
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archelyxs [2012-04-21 16:27:38 +0000 UTC]
This: "I once saw the word Empire in a children's book
I once saw a dead man give an apple to a passing child
There's a secret in this town"
And Thrice. Amazing work.
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-04-21 23:39:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much .
I'm also glad you like Thrice, they're such a phenomenal band.
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-04-22 00:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately I don't actually have their new album yet, although I've heard it's meant to be brilliant. I think my favourite thing by them is the water part of the Alchemy Index, although on it's own that's not really a full album. So I think Vheissu is my overall favourite. How about you?
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archelyxs In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-22 21:40:58 +0000 UTC]
You should get it. It's like Beggars but a bit harsher, a bit more advanced. Such a shame they are on hiatus, I saw them live about two years ago and they were life changing. I wish we could have a good debate going here but Vheissu is, in my opinion, unequivocally the best.
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-04-22 22:13:04 +0000 UTC]
It's definately near the top of my extensively long list of albums to get. I never got the chance to see them, but I would have loved to on their last tour with Moving Mountains and La Dispute since I like both of those bands almost as much as Thrice, but they never brought that tour to England . It would have been absolutely phenomenal. And aye, I love everything they've done after The Artist in the Ambulence but Vheissu is something special.
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archelyxs In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-24 19:24:13 +0000 UTC]
All of my agreement. Whom else do you listen to?
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-04-24 21:45:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow, where do I begin? :'). I've listened to music obsessively since the age of about ten so I listen to a lot. My favourite band personally is Godspeed You! Black Emperor, and I'd say my other absolute favourites would be Deftones, Sigur Rรณs, Tool, Radiohead, Thee Silver Mt Zion, Ef, This Will Destroy You, Devil Sold His Soul and Smashing Pumpkins. Although there are a lot of others, I just love scouring the internet for good music I've never heard before. What else do you grace your ears with?
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archelyxs In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-28 18:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, love those folk too. I'm seeing Radiohead and Mogwai on consecutive nights this June. So psyched.
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