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We could never fashion flight from our broken boned epiphanies(Or raise our shattered glasses to the red on her lips)
But anaemic as horses we parade them through these streets
Revolution is nothing but progress here
Perched on razorwire fences
Birds give names to ghosts and raise them as their own
Truth is a figment of your imagination
And the telephone is the wire around your neck
Hung up with wishes across the grand suburbia
Our zeitgeist is a harlot
She teaches us that duty justifies submission. It doesn't
There is salt in the street but the banks are empty
From weeping like the chorus torn from our lungs
We never quite grasped the idea of morality
When ethics were fed through hospital tubes
And sometimes they throw bricks through our open windows
Just to pick the shards of glass from our children's eyes
Bones are the most hollow of structures
And cortexial limbs can't swim these waters
Or write salvation on crumbling walls
Down at the harbour the air tastes of coma
And orphans populate the barricades like tombstones
Try to distinguish the sand from the dust
And perhaps the grass will grow once more
And fill the hollows behind these statue's eyes
I once saw the word Empire in a children's book
I once saw a dead man give an apple to a passing child
There's a secret in this town
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Comments: 71
Hexospectrum In reply to ??? [2012-04-29 22:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh my word that will be amazing, I'm rather jealous now :'). I wanted to see Radiohead too but they're sold out here. I usually have gigs lined up to go to all the time but I haven't at the moment. I went to a few at the start of the month (This Will Destroy You being the best one) but I think I'll save my money now for when Sigur Ros come over here when they release their new album. Or maybe by some miracle Godspeed will.
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archelyxs In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-05-09 18:40:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to see Sigur Ros in July! Fucking awesome summer. It's a bad habit of mine, buying concert tickets when I'm stressed out or angry
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-05-09 22:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow you really do have an amazing summer lined up for yourself... I think I'll have to wait until next year to see them. But buying Sigur Ros tickets sounds like a wonderful way to deal with stress
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archelyxs In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-05-09 23:27:27 +0000 UTC]
It's also a good way to learn about debt. By going into it!
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Hexospectrum In reply to archelyxs [2012-05-13 00:08:25 +0000 UTC]
Aye, that is an unfortunate side effect of purchasing.
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UnspecifiedUnknown In reply to ??? [2012-04-20 06:56:44 +0000 UTC]
first of all, i thought i should mention that this piece gave me chills running up and down my body and goosebumps that hurt. it also formed a lump in my throat that i can't seem to swallow back.
secondly, your best-produced poem by far, in my humble opinion. something about this that rings the right amount of colloquial beauty and peace, because you have taken such overlooked mundane subjects and moulded them into the most striking language that can possibly be procured. really, some of the things you produce leaves me breathless. this piece in of itself = stendhal syndrome. your elegant, ethereal words stirs something within my core, my psyche. and i love that so much about you.
that, my dear lovely friend, is the mark of a great writer.
you're going to change lives with your writing, truly. i have the utmost respect for you.
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Hexospectrum In reply to UnspecifiedUnknown [2012-04-20 22:32:10 +0000 UTC]
"Thank you" is just a feeble clichΓ© after a comment like that. I don't think there's any way right now that I could express how much it means to me that you would think me worthy of that kind of praise, I practically live my life in a constant attempt to remain under the experience of stendhal syndrome, to actually think that my own work could have such an effect on someone is a feeling that I can't really express in words.
And I'd love to think that I'd be able to change lives one day but such a day is still a long way off. But I'm a believer in the idea that the best way in which to change the world is through simply being a good person and if anyone can change the world with kindness it's you.
It may be a clichΓ© but I'll say it anyway: thank you.
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UnspecifiedUnknown In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-21 04:13:09 +0000 UTC]
you're too sweet, really.
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ScrewYouWorld In reply to ??? [2012-04-20 00:35:55 +0000 UTC]
That was so deep, and to my interpretation at least, I think it can apply to the world right now. XD
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Hexospectrum In reply to ScrewYouWorld [2012-04-20 22:51:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you feel it's applicable to the modern world, I must have managed to get my point across in some kind of fashion then, which is always good to know.
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ScrewYouWorld In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-21 23:05:53 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, you did! And you're welcome. ^__^
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Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-04-19 06:38:10 +0000 UTC]
"Perched on razorwire fences
Birds give names to ghosts and raise them as their own"
"I once saw the word Empire in a children's book
I once saw a dead man give an apple to a passing child"
I think these lines are brilliant.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-04-19 15:38:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot, it's always encouraging when people quote their favourite lines .
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Michel-le-fou [2012-04-18 19:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, I dare say that the wording in this piece is very interpreting. I like that. "Truth is a figment of the imagination." That's catching. Very unusual metaphors. Even I would not go that far.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Michel-le-fou [2012-04-18 21:28:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you found it to your liking
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Michel-le-fou In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-19 08:49:13 +0000 UTC]
Occasionally I read really capable poets and you are one of them.
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Hexospectrum In reply to Michel-le-fou [2012-04-19 15:28:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, that's a really encouraging thing to hear .
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Hexospectrum In reply to Michel-le-fou [2012-04-19 15:40:11 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you very much kind sir
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Michel-le-fou In reply to Hexospectrum [2012-04-19 16:30:35 +0000 UTC]
You are truly welcome too.
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