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CHAPTER 11ARO
JASPER'S POV
I heard Aro's voice, and I turned, my body crouched, I looked at Alice, with confusion, she looked at me and shrugged, she didn't know what happened, but I did know this: I would protect Emma to the ends of the world, if he came to kill me to get her, he wasn't going to get a chance at her, a growl ripped from my throat, warning him to keep his place.
Aro smiled. "Please, be at peace, brother, I don't want to kill you,"he paused "yet" I heard a snarl rip from Emma's throat as well, she didn't like Aro as much as I did.
He turned to look at her, and his face saddened. "Why do you like him so much, Emma?" he asked, sorrow was the thickest emotion in his voice, he kept no facade up, he wanted her to pity him.
"Because he is the only one who has and ever will understand me, and I love him with all my heart, and what is left of my soul." she spoke with such emotion, I looked back at her, my face softened. She looked down at me and smiled sadly, she knew this was going to end badly. "I love you" she mouthed to me, I mouthed back "I love you" she looked as if she was about to cry, I wondered if she actually could.
I turned back to Aro, surprisingly he was the only one in the clearing by our house, that I could sense besides us. I tensed again, ready to fight for Emma.
"What do you want, Aro?" Carlisle said, but we all knew what he wanted.
"I only want Emma." Aro said calmly.
"Oh really?" Emma said, her courage was amazing.
"What about Sulpicia?" I looked at Aro, he cringed at the name, apparently he hadn't heard that we knew that he had a wife. I saw his face turned to amazement, and I looked behind me, she had turned to the woman I had seen before, apparently Aro knew her.
"Who is this?"
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theXwayXsheXfeels [2011-04-21 22:16:15 +0000 UTC]
um, not to be rude, but isnt this sorta plagerism in a sense
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HoshiHitode In reply to theXwayXsheXfeels [2011-04-21 22:34:11 +0000 UTC]
I gave all copyrights to Stephanie Meyer. I wrote this about a year ago, and i hadn't (and still haven't) read a story like this before that point (and continuing)..... Plus, it's just a fan fic. i'm not going to publish this ever. so it doesn't matter. Some people like reading these, and i thought why not see what other people think? i find these types of stories a very good way to learn how to write (at least somewhat) well, and i will continue to write this way because it is a way for me to put any feelings i have about anybody somewhere, instead of inside, bottled up where it will consume me. almost all of my stories are based off of something, whether it be a manga (vampire knight, Ouran Host etc*) or a book (Harry Potter, Twilight etc*) or even a song (Far Longer than Forever from swan princess---coming soon) and i give all copyrights to their respective persons. so i know it is based off of twilight, but i have reasons. if you have any more comments, please feel free to say more.
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" "I wish none of this had ever happened." "So do all who live to see such times but that is not for them to decide. all we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us. There are other forces at work in this world, Frodo, Besides the will of evil. Bilbo was meant to find the ring. In which case, you also were meant to have it. And that is an encouraging thought." "
---Gandolf the Grey, in the mines of Moria, The Fellowship of the Ring.
"Even the smallest person can change the fate of the future."
---Galadriel, The Fellowship of the Ring.
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theXwayXsheXfeels In reply to HoshiHitode [2011-04-21 22:44:17 +0000 UTC]
a better way of excercizing your literary abilities would be to come up with your own stories, not based off of others. this would excersize your creativity factors and allow you to express detail, characterization and other literary elements in your own way. when someone bases stories off of others, they often use the author of that stories style of writing. this isnt good because it doesnt allow you to develop your own style. but, do what makes you happy, it was only a suggestion. (:
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HoshiHitode In reply to theXwayXsheXfeels [2011-04-21 22:52:59 +0000 UTC]
No, you're all good. i can see where you are coming from, and i understand what you are saying. i have made a couple of my own up, but i don't get very far. my friends seem to like the ones that i get off of books/movies/songs better for some reason. O.o I'm still in school, so i can't usually get too deep in my writing (or else i get in trouble heehee *shifty eyes*) but i see what you're saying. thank you for the comment. it was appreciated.
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theXwayXsheXfeels In reply to HoshiHitode [2011-04-21 23:03:34 +0000 UTC]
i unerstand, im still in school too. and no problem
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