Dreyfus2006 [2008-11-26 22:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I've seen the Full View now. I don't have much to add or change in my previous critique, except as I've said many times try to color inside the lines. Oh, and perhaps go back with an eraser and make the tendril-like lines in the background a bit pointier.

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Dreyfus2006 [2008-11-26 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Right now my internet's only letting me see the Small View so my critique may be a bit off...

I'm digging the background. Drawing Raymanians means having to deal with a lot of negative space, and you've certainly succeeded in making the negative space around him very zesty and fun. And I also like how unlike some of your previous pictures you've cropped this and have gotten rid of unneeded space. The shading is done well, and this is certainly an all-around well-done picture, though as I said I can't see the Full View right now.

Good job.

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