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scribbled reminders on countertops andtables
a paper trail leading towards a better place
a better me
moments of inspiration spring from
the lowest of lows
to be a better me is the way to be
but it better be
tomorrow
so go ahead, scribble a notes and leave them
on tables turned at the bottom of the well
just so long as the changes i'll face take place
tomorrow
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Comments: 12
BlueAlgae [2010-09-24 07:10:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the laziness, and so much more (the trauma, the pain, expectation, mental disorders, legacies handed down from our parents' parents' parents) trap so many of us inside our own good intentions. I relate well to this also, but I wonder who, other than a sociopath, wouldn't.
It's a lovely representation of your own personal struggle with this common issue. And crap it may well be, in your eyes, because feeling that way is some of the lowest, self hating crap we pour on ourselves. Why wouldn't a poem about it be crap in one's own eye as well. It seems oddly poetic that it should happen that way.
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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to BlueAlgae [2010-09-26 07:09:26 +0000 UTC]
interesting point, life/crap, crap/art
thank you for reading
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Cibbwin [2010-05-23 00:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Anything BUT crap. I relate so well to this. It's the laziness that separates dreamers from doers.
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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to nighttimebeautiful [2010-04-28 04:26:57 +0000 UTC]
whoohoo! danke
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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to imba1 [2010-04-28 04:26:36 +0000 UTC]
muchas gracias mi amiga!
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nighttimebeautiful [2010-04-23 01:39:01 +0000 UTC]
crap is always the best.
always. no exceptions.
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Hyperionic-Xmissions In reply to nighttimebeautiful [2010-04-23 08:01:31 +0000 UTC]
our definitions of best may differ, but thank you.
though, i am usually quite fond of your "crap"
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nighttimebeautiful In reply to Hyperionic-Xmissions [2010-04-23 13:44:37 +0000 UTC]
so, how about, crap is always the best to others
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