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I think Iβve met my guardian angel.
It slinks through the rusted pipes,
seeping between the cracks in the cement
and finding its way through the
carcasses of rats and starved dogs
in search of beauty.
It marvels at the skyscrapers
that it knows will crumble down
with one word from its master.
The smell of smoke and rotted
breath it inhales every second
keeps it alive.
It creeps through alleyways,
oβer splintered glass and
dampened cardboard boxes
(THIS WAY UP, CAUTION, CONTENTS
ARE FRAGILE)
beneath torn-away flyers
that read of fantasy lands
and fairytale stories
that never were.
It finds its way
to me.
To everyone else I was
everything else.
I was the rusted pipes,
the cracks in the cement
the starved dead dogs
the crumbling skyscrapers
the smell of smoke
the splintered glass
the cardboard boxes (THIS WAY UP)
the torn-away flyers
everything else
that didn't matter.
To my guardian angel
I was the fairytale story.
I know I've met my guardian angel.
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Comments: 2
redruM-110 [2009-04-14 14:08:00 +0000 UTC]
I like this one. Has a good sinister, icky feel to it. Wasn't too sure about the word o'er (puts me in mind of Wordsworth which doesn't really fit with your theme) but I'm probably being too picky now, lol. I did like the descriptions of the cardboard boxes- adds a nice bit of dark humour. Good work
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HyperStrudel In reply to redruM-110 [2009-04-14 14:19:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I understand what you mean about "o'er". I thought it would sound sort of delicate against things such as splintered glass or a dirty alleyway. True, though, people have told me to remove it and I get where you're coming from. Thanks bunches for the comment!
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