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*collapses on the floor*Do you have any idea what is the correct onomatopoeia for psychic annihilation?
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woo wooo woo is fantastic onomatopeia here but again I am to dull to know why it's here
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I think that in cases of sper natural powers you may have your ovn idea of onomatopeia or suit it to existing sound.
The sound Yuri's psichic crown when he mindcontrolled guy from intro wi=ould be 'bloop bloop bloop' or something like that for excample. Not sure.
I oly know japan onomatopeias are more reach than world onomatopeias. I even know there is a sound when something scarry appears in silence but all is from japaneese manga
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This link I gave You is genious! You just need to see whole this page.
To the wind whistle which would suits telekinesis there is:
: whoo, whoosh, swish, rustle, whine, whizz, whistle, wheeze, howl, zoom, sigh, sough, surf.
Sounds nice but I don't think changing that page is necessary. It's to much work and all is great!
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Hmm..I don't understand only onomatopeia 'pant, pant' it symbolize someone is telepatically contacting with Yuriko?
I am not sure in Boom and bang when Yuriko use telekinesis . I think wind move sound would suit but also I always have big problem with onomatopeias.
But look here! It might give you ideas!!!
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'Pant, pant' indicates exhaustion, though it's not quite an onomatopoeia.
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This is a good page. When did this escape attempt take place? There are no paralysis whips out and there's no sign of a full psionic shield, so I presume this is before Final Exam? But Yuriko looks older in the last panel ... So it could be after ...
I think this is an awkward time to have an extended flashback ... Takara, if she's competent at all, is unlikely to think too much about her previous victory over Yuriko when a stronger Yuriko's about to unleash her fury. My advice would be not to make this flashback scene too long.
A psi-destruction onomatopoeia? Here goes nothing ... KA-BOOM? Sounds silly, I know.
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