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HyrAyl — Yuriko Rising, page 5
Published: 2010-09-14 14:22:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2274; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 24
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READ RIGHT TO LEFTThis took forever. My computer hates me.
Here i tried to use a simplier, flatter style, like old comics or manga. I'm really not very satisfied either, but who cares, i'm doing this to learn.
Today i learned lettering is a b*tch.
Also i started using chibi-ish anime faces.
For the next page i'm not sure if returning to Yuriko, introducing Yuri or starting with Tanya.
I'll probably also start using normal left-to-right formatting, there's no real reason why i should write it like a manga...
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Because all soviet intelligence officer keep Flak and V3 rockets under their tables.what?you know that it's true!
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Upon a quick re-read, I see a potential plot hole now. No offense, but if a Yuriko clone's been brainwashed to be a Soviet super-soldier, wouldn't her name be changed to a Russian one?
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Perhaps. I did consider the possibility of changing her name... i suppose i could translate Yuriko in russian...
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But adding ko to a japanese name means daughter. Yuri's daughter! It all makes sense now! Plus yuri is a Russian name, so there is no sin here.
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In my humble opinion, an actual Russian name would sound better.
On a side note, Dasha's Tesla Coil gun made me LOL.
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I like a lot! I see you concentrated more on details! That's fantastic! Introduce Yuri I wanna see way you showed him
weird idea with dumb looking Yuriko but yu're the boss!!!
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