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Published: 2012-09-25 14:32:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 567; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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I don't even know where to startSo I just cut open my heart
Throw it at your head like a dart
I'm so conceited so im gonna talk about myself
I've had a life
I've had a wife
And I've had a daughter
I'm only twenty years old and I'm an old man
But I lost my life
So I gotta make a new one
It's like I was reborn
I got a brand new set of horns
And a giant thorn
I got a new soul, I mean I'm soulless
I sold it for everything I ever wanted
But I only ever got the building blocks
And they all crumbled to the touch
My life was never easy
I wish I could get things done like its sleazy
But nigga I think I'm to lazy
Maybe I smoke too much bud
Stay too hazy
Always faded because I can't handle
It makes me sad
The life I could of had
But I'm a lying lion
And I'll burn the herb til I fall asleep and burn the house down
Got a frown on my face but I don't give a shit
Move on and smoke another l
Pop a couple pills
Get some easy thrills
Put on the bass that kills
If I can't hear you the volume is not high enough
Turn it up until your speakers turn to dust
We gonna be deaf in here
Blind to the blue lights
Bouncin out like we ridin out
Cheesin like a mother fucker
What can I say, you make my day
Roll me up another jay
I'm not high enough
You say you be flying like a blue jay though
But girl you just a hoe
Smoke another bowl
I wanna feel good
And I don't wanna feel anything anymore
I'm becoming numb
I'm comfortably numb
Didn't get as much pink as floyd
But I don't give a shit
Cause I got green like lloyd
And I'm sittin in outter space
With a girl in some lace
Gettin some face
She going at a killer pace
And imma bout to blow on her face like its mace
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Comments: 8
You should consider putting this under mature just in case~
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well hmm i'm opposed in principle to the 'mature' masking; i prefer to judge the work by its technical skill and movement. there are moments and passages in the work that somehow manage to save it from being simply another dollop of rote dreck. *shrug*
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hmm i do not think 'swagger' is an appropriate word for what is exposed in the work ...
Swagger is to to move with confidence, sophistication and to be cool.
Swagger is to conduct your self in a way that would automaticaly earn respect
To dress in a very stylish and quirkily fasionable way would suggest one is swagger.
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i would apply more ancient and elegant terms to it
"droll" "juvenile" "insipid" "masking a very well developed sense of insecurity" and god once i am started upon this path of liquid language ... i shall desist. *shrug*
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lol, you guys were quite interesting to read.
Lacking flavor I like that, but its real talk and some words I say different than they actually sound so some parts obviously sound kinda weird if its read, especially if you don't really understand some of the lines for what they actually mean.
"masking a very well developed sense of insecurity"
Love that 
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well noted here that you picked a title most appropriate.
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Keyword is "should"
Not saying you should. It's just to avoid troubles. Anyways, the piece was enjoyable to read. It had...it's own swagger? Personality?
I think that's how I want to describe it.
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I have some pretty brutal stuff not under mature and its all good lol.
Thank you for enjoying a read and not being to nit picky...cough cough.
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Well, I could comment on the slang words that should have had slight tweaks but I'm not that kind of person. I think the person who writes is aware enough as to know what they did mistakes. So why should I nag?
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