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Description This is a scene from my Fanfic "Maelstrom". In my storyline Vector Sigma has been manipulating both sides of the war since the get go - keeping the factions in balance and fighting. Things get ugly when the Autobots find out.

Maelstrom - 9 full B&W comics and a few thousand pages of fan-fiction. Rated M for violence and language. illmatar.deviantart.com/galler…

Obviously I am a Transformers fan-girl. The art is mine. The characters are Hasbro's.

Excerpt from Maelstrom text story: Tunnels (Text edited for strong language.)  Maelstrom Ch 14 Tunnels Prt A
Author's note: This is part of a LONG series called Maelstrom. It is strictly Gen. 1 - sorry, but that was all that was out when I started writing. If you have not read the nine original Maelstrom Comics and the preceding text stories, I strongly suggest you do.
RATED MATURE FOR VIOLENCE!
For the start of the series:
https://illmatar.deviantart.com/gallery/98749
Tunnels
Optimus Prime met Ultra Magnus at the first rendezvous.  He would not meet the City Commander’s optics however, or answer the questions in them.  Instead he led Magnus on an intricate “long cut” to the next meeting place.
Jazz was waiting for them as ordered.  He’d been given an equally circuitous route to follow to get there.  It was plain to Magnus from the intent look on Jazz’s face that the specialist wasn’t worried, just intrigued.  Magnus envied him a bit, especially when Optimus curtly ordered them to be silent.  It was like

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“How do you know you’ll be able to trust it to do what you say?” Jazz finally asked.

“Several reasons. One, we’re its only prayer against the Jabez. Two, it will soon be aware that if it kills us, Optimus is standing ready to destroy this entire region. Three, I’m going to plant a bomb under its resting site. Gee, it must be a bitch not having hands or anything.” He flashed that viscous grin again, and showed them the tiny but powerful device. Rodi’s companions found it a beautiful sight.

“Can I hold it?” Magnus asked.

Rodimus narrowed his optics suspiciously. “Can I trust you with it?”

“Yes.”

“Really?”

“Yes.”

“OK. But you have to give it back before we get to Vector Sigma’s chamber.” Rodimus said, handing it over. Jazz just shook his head. Magnus looked at it and smiled.

They took turns standing guard while the others shut down and recharged. This was their fourth such stop and the power cells were nearly drained. They could only hope the trip back was less time-consuming than the one down. When they were all feeling stronger they started off again, with Rodi and Magnus taking turns helping Jazz. Rodimus took it as a bad sign that the injured specialist didn’t even argue about the assistance.

It only took them half a day to cover an equal distance to what they had covered in the last three. There were traps but they were all locked or dormant. No drones molested them either. Rodimus smiled grimly to himself. Vector Sigma knew what had brought him down here but not what Rodimus intended to do about it. Perhaps it was hoping to call a truce. There would be no truce. There would be an unconditional surrender if Rodimus had his way. As they neared the chamber, Magnus gave back the bomb without being reminded. Rodimus smirked on the sly at Jazz who only shrugged.

When they entered the chamber Jazz and Magnus were a little surprised to see Vector Sigma up and activated. Rodimus was not. Like everything else about the super computer the need for some kind of activating key or device was a misleading falsehood to add mysticism and discourage annoying visits from pesky Transformers. After all, why make such an dangerous trek if you couldn’t even awaken the thing you wanted to talk to?

There was a moment of silence as three embittered Autobots regarded their creator. Vector Sigma tried to maintain its cover, even though it knew from the holograms that Rodimus had figured out its secrets.

The impressive voice resonated through the chamber. “I AM VECTOR SIGMA. BEFORE CYBERTRON WAS, I WA...”

“You was a Jabez created tinker toy! Shut up, you piece of lying sh**!” Rodimus said. He said it so calmly, that Jazz wasn’t even sure he heard the words correctly. Personally, Jazz felt such a phrase deserved to be shouted as loudly as possible.

“I AM YOUR CREATOR! HOW DARE YO..” the glowing mass of circuitry began.

“Oh, you’d be surprised what I dare to do. Having been on a field trip to meet your designer changes one’s attitude a bit.”

Jazz and Magnus both felt their jaws drop yet again.

“The Jabez designed it? IS THERE ANYTHING ELSE YOU LIKE TO TELL US, RODIMUS?” Magnus roared.

“Not right now,” Rodimus said calmly. Magnus threw up his hands and started pacing furiously.

“I think I need to sit down,” Jazz said weakly, which he did right where he’d been standing.

“Rodimus...how can you be sure?” Magnus asked urgently.

Rodimus smirked nastily, “Because our lying progenitor isn’t as unique as it probably would like. There are two more just like it on the Maelstrom, but they aren’t sentient. Look at it Magnus. It’s the Matrix, only bigger. You don’t amount to much do you Sigma? Just an overblown memory crystal. The Maelstrom is loaded with them. Little ones, big ones, and two huge ones like you. It’s just the lying, manipulating, and murdering that makes you special.”

The crystalline computer pulsed and flared erratically, but remained silent.

“I don’t expect you to own up to it...” Rodimus whispered almost seductively. “It doesn’t matter if you answer me or not. I won’t trust anything you say anyhow.”

Without taking his optics off of it, Rodimus told Magnus, “The Maelstrom carries a network of over 300 Matrix style crystals that Lancer knew of, with two newer versions of Vector Sigma at the heart of it. Now, I am just guessing of course, but the Maelstrom was stolen breaking Pagan out of a Jabez research facility...and they killed a few Jabez to get it. That means the Maelstrom is Jabez handiwork. I saw Matrix style crystals while I was being tortured too. I could be wrong of course, but somehow I don’t think so.”

He smiled, and looked a bit bit deranged as he did so.

“Now then, where was I?” Rodimus said, “OH, yes. Here’s the deal, if you want to stay alive you are going to do exactly what we say, whenever we say it. Really, it’s all very simple.”

“I STILL think we should just destroy it!” Magnus growled, coming to a halt by Rodi’s side. “It can’t be trusted! It lied and manipulated us for our WHOLE history! It has too many lives to answer for!”
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Comments: 48

MDTartist83 [2020-02-16 02:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Cool. 

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loaves [2012-02-11 12:29:15 +0000 UTC]

What an interesting concept!

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illmatar In reply to loaves [2012-02-12 12:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I've been working on this for a while.

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loaves In reply to illmatar [2012-02-19 14:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Do you find that you write chapters out of order as the ideas flow?

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illmatar In reply to loaves [2012-02-20 14:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Not since the beginning. When I started there was no one to share the story with. I started with the scenes I was most into, but went into the back-story when I found out there were still other fans in existence even though Hasbro pulled the plug on everything.

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loaves In reply to illmatar [2012-02-26 10:38:28 +0000 UTC]

A LOT more than you realized! I didn't realize fandom was such a big thing until I went to a Quantum Leap fan-fic site back in the 90's!

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illmatar In reply to loaves [2012-02-26 13:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Liane Elliot posted a letter in the "very last" issue of the original G-1 comics to let people know she was starting a fan group. That's how I found out I wasn't alone. There were just a few of us...and no websites yet.

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loaves In reply to illmatar [2012-02-28 10:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so you guys were the pioneers so to speak!

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illmatar In reply to loaves [2012-03-20 22:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Very much so.

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loaves In reply to illmatar [2012-03-22 18:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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Taiya001 [2012-02-07 02:40:58 +0000 UTC]

You've got such a great art style

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illmatar In reply to Taiya001 [2012-02-12 12:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Taiya001 In reply to illmatar [2012-02-12 14:29:55 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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Plenoptic07 [2010-03-29 07:04:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, while the picture is amazing...great coloring and all that wonderful stuff...is the tiny trickle of energon on Jazz's foot the "violence and gore" part?? Or am I missing the flying heads and energon spewing sixty feet into the air???

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illmatar In reply to Plenoptic07 [2010-03-29 12:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh. I'm a teacher...I'm paranoid. Plus, the series is very violent and I tend to just throw that on there for consistency. Thanks!

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Pacerwolf [2010-03-28 15:49:50 +0000 UTC]

I've seen this before a while ago and it's wonderfully dark and gritty in style.

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illmatar In reply to Pacerwolf [2010-03-29 14:01:28 +0000 UTC]

Gritty seems to work for me, but that's probably because I'm too lazy to do clean stuff.

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Pacerwolf In reply to illmatar [2010-03-29 18:44:54 +0000 UTC]

I've ventured into writing dark stuff myself once but left it hanging so to speak. Figuring i was better at odd comedy and drama.

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illmatar In reply to Pacerwolf [2010-03-31 16:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Mine vacillates too...we all have our comfort zones.

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Fourth-Goddess [2010-03-28 15:17:32 +0000 UTC]

I have a question; why are Roddy's optics green? :/

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illmatar In reply to Fourth-Goddess [2010-03-29 14:02:57 +0000 UTC]

Oy...short question...long answer. Without going on forever, let's just say he was unwillingly modified and processes energon differently now, especially when agitated.

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Fourth-Goddess In reply to illmatar [2010-03-29 16:18:08 +0000 UTC]

alright, I'll take that answer XD wow...nice one Roddy

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DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-28 21:55:26 +0000 UTC]

So I never looked at this piece of work till just now. It's really cool. I think I need to read up on previous stuffs.....


But really good artwork here. How was your Thanksgiving?

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-28 22:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! My Thanksgiving was great! I cooked, and no one got food poisoning. A miracle!

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-28 22:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Did you see The Great Pumpkin?


Oh wait. Wrong Holiday.



Glad your day went well

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-28 22:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Heh...I ATE the great pumpkin so it is the right holiday after all!

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-28 23:50:23 +0000 UTC]

you.......you...... MONSTER!

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-29 02:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Monster?! Of course! You've seen my gallery! This is not news.

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-29 04:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Naws. You is not a Monster. Me was just thinking about the Punpkinmanity of it all.

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-29 12:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Aw...I was having fun being a Pumpkincidal monster!

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-29 18:43:18 +0000 UTC]

So does this make me the Jesse Jackson of Punpkin rights? 'Shudders'

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-30 13:32:09 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Why yes! I think it does!

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-30 18:37:22 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!


Did I mention..... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-30 18:51:11 +0000 UTC]

*points and laughs*

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-30 21:40:53 +0000 UTC]

now I just need to find Mr. Sharpton

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-11-30 22:23:17 +0000 UTC]

LOL...I'll keep an eye out for you.

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-11-30 23:48:39 +0000 UTC]

With my pumpkiness I don't know whether to welcome him or to kick the crap outta him for general purposes.

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illmatar In reply to DOOFUS123456 [2008-12-01 01:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, in such a dilemma you welcome them in to sucker them into relaxing and THEN you kick the crap out of them. Problem solved.

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DOOFUS123456 In reply to illmatar [2008-12-01 04:02:16 +0000 UTC]

BRILLIANT!

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ToaVeka [2008-07-27 21:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow... That's all I can say...

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illmatar In reply to ToaVeka [2008-07-28 01:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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kup61 [2008-07-15 18:28:18 +0000 UTC]

cool. awesome deatail.

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illmatar In reply to kup61 [2008-07-15 19:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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kup61 In reply to illmatar [2008-07-15 19:26:51 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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PirateNikki [2008-02-08 03:15:57 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME-NESS.

Colors just GORGEOUS.

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illmatar In reply to PirateNikki [2008-02-08 10:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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dreaming1 [2007-10-20 01:56:10 +0000 UTC]

*grins* Ah good ol' fanfic. I think that's a pretty good pic!!!

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illmatar In reply to dreaming1 [2007-10-20 02:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That was fast - I haven't even checked to see if this worked yet! (In case you have guessed - I've never posted here before.) Thanks for the props!

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